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Comment from MizKat
Hi Gypsy,
Again you have written another interesting poem. The picture you added to it goes well with it too. You are great at writing poetry and finding or making just the right picture to put with them.
Kat
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2017
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Hi Gypsy,
Again you have written another interesting poem. The picture you added to it goes well with it too. You are great at writing poetry and finding or making just the right picture to put with them.
Kat
Comment Written 13-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2017
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thank you
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You're welcome. Kat
Comment from Rasmine
Awesome. I love bluebells. Very pretty to me, especially when I was a child and picking them--the blue offset the yellow in buttercups and dandelions, lol.
:)
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2017
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Awesome. I love bluebells. Very pretty to me, especially when I was a child and picking them--the blue offset the yellow in buttercups and dandelions, lol.
:)
Comment Written 13-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2017
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Thank you very much for reading, my friend :) May your day be filled with laughter and joy.
namaste,
Gypsy Haijin Sensei
Fanstory Instructor and Poet
Member of the Haiku Society of America
~*~ a new haiku class every month ~*~
<>Haiga class starts on May 1st <>
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You have the reply on automatic :P
Take care, Gypsy :)
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Maybe I'm confusing the blue flowers with another one.
Comment from Hitcher
You always manage to find awesome artwork to accompany you cool haiku friend, love the picture! You have got to admire the beauty of the common Bluebell, plus Blue is my favorite color in all its shades.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2017
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You always manage to find awesome artwork to accompany you cool haiku friend, love the picture! You have got to admire the beauty of the common Bluebell, plus Blue is my favorite color in all its shades.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2017
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Thank you. I am very picky with presentations.
Thank you very much for reading, my friend :) May your day be filled with laughter and joy.
namaste,
Gypsy Haijin Sensei
Fanstory Instructor and Poet
Member of the Haiku Society of America
~*~ a new haiku class every month ~*~
<>Haiga class starts on May 1st <>
Comment from DR DIP
haha you are on a weed roll at the moment Gypsy! Morning glory, bluebells, dandelions, cherry blossoms...a botanist dream. no one track mind this time here i see the literal interpretation. Thanks for sharing.
Gypsy would you write a rhyming verse for me just for a change I know you used to write a couple in the early days. Just for a change lol
You have mastered haiku
dip
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2017
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haha you are on a weed roll at the moment Gypsy! Morning glory, bluebells, dandelions, cherry blossoms...a botanist dream. no one track mind this time here i see the literal interpretation. Thanks for sharing.
Gypsy would you write a rhyming verse for me just for a change I know you used to write a couple in the early days. Just for a change lol
You have mastered haiku
dip
Comment Written 13-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2017
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when you write a haiku I will write a rhyming poem
you have mastered romantic poems, try free verse
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its a deal
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you are on
Comment from Dean Kuch
Nice, Teach.
Once again a very lovely haiku.
Apple Hill... you must be referring to the beautiful Apple Hill Region of Placerville, California, where Boa Vista offers a diverse selection of fresh produce, delicious baked goods, crisp apple ciders, flavorful apple & red wines, and much more...every day!
I understand that harvest time in Apple Hill is highlighted during the Summer and Fall seasons; Apples, Asian Pears, berries, peaches, plump pears, and plums, just to name a few!
Very nice...
~Deano-Son :)
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2017
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Nice, Teach.
Once again a very lovely haiku.
Apple Hill... you must be referring to the beautiful Apple Hill Region of Placerville, California, where Boa Vista offers a diverse selection of fresh produce, delicious baked goods, crisp apple ciders, flavorful apple & red wines, and much more...every day!
I understand that harvest time in Apple Hill is highlighted during the Summer and Fall seasons; Apples, Asian Pears, berries, peaches, plump pears, and plums, just to name a few!
Very nice...
~Deano-Son :)
Comment Written 13-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2017
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How did you know? hahaha... good job, my friend. You are 100% right. Thank you.
Gypsy Sensei
Comment from Sis Cat
Beautiful imagery, Gypsy. Poem is tactile because it has the movement of bluebells, the feel of wind, and the crispness of an April shower. You also make effective us of the Ap- sound, creating a harmonious flow.
Thank you for sharing your considerable talent again.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2017
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Beautiful imagery, Gypsy. Poem is tactile because it has the movement of bluebells, the feel of wind, and the crispness of an April shower. You also make effective us of the Ap- sound, creating a harmonious flow.
Thank you for sharing your considerable talent again.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2017
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Thank you, Andre, I appreciate your review. :)
Gypsy
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
This is a very good Haiku poem.
It has three lines.
Each line has the correct syllable count: 3-7-5
Great artwork: The image of the Bluebells is gorgeous.
The author's notes are greatly appreciated.- Thank you!
Thanks for sharing your poem.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2017
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This is a very good Haiku poem.
It has three lines.
Each line has the correct syllable count: 3-7-5
Great artwork: The image of the Bluebells is gorgeous.
The author's notes are greatly appreciated.- Thank you!
Thanks for sharing your poem.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
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Comment Written 13-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2017
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Thank you for the review :)
Gypsy
Comment from emptypage
I can imagine a hallucinogenic ocean version of these flowers moving in the wind... hallucinogenic only because of the amazing blue color. This is not your everyday ocean hue.
My favorite part? The last line, "crisp April shower." Beautifully descriptive. I really love that word combination.
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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2017
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I can imagine a hallucinogenic ocean version of these flowers moving in the wind... hallucinogenic only because of the amazing blue color. This is not your everyday ocean hue.
My favorite part? The last line, "crisp April shower." Beautifully descriptive. I really love that word combination.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2017
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thank you
