Comment from LateBloomer

Excellent

Hello Gypsy Blue, I enjoyed reading your poem, and I enjoy reading (and writing) about the color blue. It's such an interesting color - not necessarily sad. Your haiku is filled with vivid imagery. I can see it; I can hear it.

I especially liked:

blue bells move
with the wind in Apple Hill --

(Vivid, yet velvety soft, imagery -- very lovely.)

Fantastic artwork choice. Great haiku format. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017

Thank you very much for reading, have a great weekend,

Gypsy

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

A field of bluebells is lovely. One can imagine them blowing in the wind. Mentioning April adds to the picture, because we think of all the flowers blooming at that time. They would look all fresh, blowing in the breeze. Lovely presentation. judi

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2017

Thank you very much for reading, my friend :) Thank you for reading three in a row.

namaste,


Gypsy Haijin Sensei
Fanstory Instructor and Poet
Member of the Haiku Society of America
~*~ a new haiku class every month ~*~
<>Haiga class starts on May 1st <>

reply by judiverse on 15-Apr-2017

You're quite welcome. Have a great Easter. judi

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I enjoyed another of your haiku focused on flowers, wild or not. Thank you for your notes and striking artwork selection as well. Smiles- Joan

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2017

When I was little I loved picking wildflowers. I would be gone for hours collecting them. When my parents moved to the country I was so happy. Thank you for reading, JOan :)

Gypsy hugs

reply by Joan E. on 14-Apr-2017

Hope your holiday weekend is filled with flowers! More smiles- Joan

reply by the author on 14-Apr-2017

thank you :) you too :)

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Queen of Haiku, good to see you...you can almost see the Bluebells blowing in the wind...what a beautiful picture...love you poem sweet angel...and a stunning picture...very nicely written...love ya Linda xxxoo

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2017

Thank you, Linda, how are you? I hope you are feeling better. luv ya.

Gypsy

reply by l.raven on 13-Apr-2017

HI Sweet girl, doing much better...just a cough...and hope it goes away soon...concussion getting better...thank you for caring my sweet friend...and you are so welcome...xxoo love to ya..

Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep

Excellent

This is quite a startling colour combination, Gypsy, but I like the green background. More importantly, your haiku is informative as well as well formed and with an imagistic satori. Giddy

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2017

Thank you very much for reading, my friend :)

namaste,


Gypsy Haijin Sensei
Fanstory Instructor and Poet
Member of the Haiku Society of America
~*~ a new haiku class every month ~*~
<>Haiga class starts on May 1st <>

Comment from Mark Schardine

Excellent

Flowers sway with the wind and gain more energy from the rain. They will create an impressive sight, and painters have a moment to capture it.

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2017

Thank you very much for reading, my friend :) May your day be filled with laughter and joy.

namaste,


Gypsy Haijin Sensei
Fanstory Instructor and Poet
Member of the Haiku Society of America
~*~ a new haiku class every month ~*~
<>Haiga class starts on May 1st <>

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

As a lover of wild flowers, or weeds as many may call them, I am enjoying these haiku poems and picture combinations that welcome the early spring. Great job. :-)

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2017

Thank you very much for reading, my friend :) May your day be filled with laughter and joy.

namaste,


Gypsy Haijin Sensei
Fanstory Instructor and Poet
Member of the Haiku Society of America
~*~ a new haiku class every month ~*~
<>Haiga class starts on May 1st <>

Comment from Grasshopper2

Excellent

Lady Blue,
Wonderful image of all those bluebells. I like the photo, I think. LOL.
Minor nit in your notes.
Here: Bluebells is a wild flower and bulbousperennial plant,
Edited: Bluebells are wildflowers and are Bulbous perennial plants.

Enjoyed reading you.

Michael

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2017

Thank you very much for reading, my friend :) thank you for letting me know about my error. May your day be filled with laughter and joy.

namaste,


Gypsy Haijin Sensei
Fanstory Instructor and Poet
Member of the Haiku Society of America
~*~ a new haiku class every month ~*~
<>Haiga class starts on May 1st <>

Comment from Selina Stambi

Excellent

Hello Gypsy,

I've come to understand that it takes fine honing and crafting to create a 'real' classy haiku. This one is gorgeous. I'm always impressed at how the careful placing of a few well chosen words can create such an impact.

Have a great Easter weekend.

Sonali xx

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2017

Thank you very much for reading, my friend :) May your day be filled with laughter and joy.

namaste,


Gypsy Haijin Sensei
Fanstory Instructor and Poet
Member of the Haiku Society of America
~*~ a new haiku class every month ~*~
<>Haiga class starts on May 1st <>

Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson

Excellent

Very pretty Bluebell Haiku Gypsy. beautiful in the wind. Oh, check the print on the page, the square shadow is showing behind the letters. ~Kerry~

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2017

Thank you very much for reading, my friend :) May your day be filled with laughter and joy.

namaste,


Gypsy Haijin Sensei
Fanstory Instructor and Poet
Member of the Haiku Society of America
~*~ a new haiku class every month ~*~
<>Haiga class starts on May 1st <>

reply by Kerry Foley Robinson on 15-Apr-2017

your very welcome Gypsy, Have a Happy Easter.