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23 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
HI Gypsy, I have seen lone weeds growing on sidewalks and in parking lots...you wonder how they survived...some weeds are very pretty...very nicely written sweet angel...and I love your picture...love ya you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2017
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HI Gypsy, I have seen lone weeds growing on sidewalks and in parking lots...you wonder how they survived...some weeds are very pretty...very nicely written sweet angel...and I love your picture...love ya you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 14-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2017
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yes, me too, I see weeds in a lot near my old apartment. Now I live in the heart of Sacramento... no more weeds around.
Thank you for reading, sweetie pie.
Gypsy
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I hope you got safely...and you are happy where you are...you are so welcome sweet lady...love xxoo
Comment from bookishfabler
I hate weeds. When I used to garden way back when it was dreadful how ell weeds grew but not the vegetables. LOL. What a lovely Haiku describing that.
hugs Heidi
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I hate weeds. When I used to garden way back when it was dreadful how ell weeds grew but not the vegetables. LOL. What a lovely Haiku describing that.
hugs Heidi
Comment Written 14-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2017
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Thank you very much for reading, my friend :)
namaste,
Gypsy Haijin Sensei
Fanstory Instructor and Poet
Member of the Haiku Society of America
~*~ a new haiku class every month ~*~
<>Haiga class starts on May 1st <>
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
When I read this I thought straight away, how true! unwanted eyesore... A perfect Satori. Well done, Gypsy, and the colours are fine in this one. I had no trouble with it and I like the choice, Giddy
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2017
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When I read this I thought straight away, how true! unwanted eyesore... A perfect Satori. Well done, Gypsy, and the colours are fine in this one. I had no trouble with it and I like the choice, Giddy
Comment Written 13-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2017
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Thank you very much for reading, my friend :)
namaste,
Gypsy Haijin Sensei
Fanstory Instructor and Poet
Member of the Haiku Society of America
~*~ a new haiku class every month ~*~
<>Haiga class starts on May 1st <>
Comment from cumulus365
Weeds are unwanted eyesore. This haiku tells of a place that no one pays attention to the aesthetic of the land so weeds are product of floating seeds from another area over take the place.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2017
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Weeds are unwanted eyesore. This haiku tells of a place that no one pays attention to the aesthetic of the land so weeds are product of floating seeds from another area over take the place.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2017
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Thank you very much for reading, my friend :) May your day be filled with laughter and joy.
namaste,
Gypsy Haijin Sensei
Fanstory Instructor and Poet
Member of the Haiku Society of America
~*~ a new haiku class every month ~*~
<>Haiga class starts on May 1st <>
Comment from Mark Schardine
Weeds grow better than any other plant, and they will also hinder others' growth. We can only watch them grow, or watch them return.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2017
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Weeds grow better than any other plant, and they will also hinder others' growth. We can only watch them grow, or watch them return.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2017
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Thank you very much for reading, my friend :) thank you for reading all my haiku in a row.
namaste,
Gypsy Haijin Sensei
Fanstory Instructor and Poet
Member of the Haiku Society of America
~*~ a new haiku class every month ~*~
<>Haiga class starts on May 1st <>
Comment from MizKat
Hi Gypsy,
Again you have written a wonderful poem and also put up a very nice picture to go with you. You are great at writing poetry and I'm always interested in
reading what you write.
Kat
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2017
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Hi Gypsy,
Again you have written a wonderful poem and also put up a very nice picture to go with you. You are great at writing poetry and I'm always interested in
reading what you write.
Kat
Comment Written 13-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2017
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thank you
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You're welcome again! Kat
Comment from Joan E.
Your poem can be read as a literal description of a weed, or it can be a metaphor for a serious, "unwanted eyesore". I admired your presentation as well. Cheers- Joan
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Your poem can be read as a literal description of a weed, or it can be a metaphor for a serious, "unwanted eyesore". I admired your presentation as well. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 13-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2017
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Thank you sweetie pie. :)
namaste,
Gypsy Haijin Sensei
Fanstory Instructor and Poet
Member of the Haiku Society of America
~*~ a new haiku class every month ~*~
<>Haiga class starts on May 1st <>
Comment from Lu Saluna
Oh, this is so true. Got to love that one dark green weed that shines bright and grows taller than anything else is the hot beaming sun.
Weeds and I have a love-hate relationship. I hate them, they love me. I can't get rid of them, lol.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2017
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Oh, this is so true. Got to love that one dark green weed that shines bright and grows taller than anything else is the hot beaming sun.
Weeds and I have a love-hate relationship. I hate them, they love me. I can't get rid of them, lol.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2017
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Hello, my friend,
When I was a little girl, I liked picking flowers, only most of the time they were not flowers... they were pretty weeds.
Thank you for reading.
namaste,
Gypsy Haijin Sensei
Fanstory Instructor and Poet
Member of the Haiku Society of America
~*~ a new haiku class every month ~*~
<>Haiga class starts on May 1st <>
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Gypsy Blue Rose: I like your weed poem with it catching the sunlight.
Weeds can be anywhere. Thanks for promoting haikus on FS.
Did you have a book on Amazon? My daughters like poetry.
flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2017
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Gypsy Blue Rose: I like your weed poem with it catching the sunlight.
Weeds can be anywhere. Thanks for promoting haikus on FS.
Did you have a book on Amazon? My daughters like poetry.
flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 12-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2017
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Hello, my friend, I have two books on Amazon and one in local bookstores.
When I was a little girl, I liked picking flowers, only most of the time they were not flowers... they were pretty weeds.
Thank you for reading.
namaste,
Gypsy Haijin Sensei
Fanstory Instructor and Poet
Member of the Haiku Society of America
~*~ a new haiku class every month ~*~
<>Haiga class starts on May 1st <>
Comment from Ric Myworld
Damn weeds, yes, "Unwanted eyesores." I spent the day trying to rid my yard of the unwanted pests, with my potent pesticide. Two broken spray wands with leaking gaskets and I was soaked, ruined my clothes and $200 tennis shoes, and my skin is blistered. Then, I come to read your wonderful poetry to relax and unwind. And what is your poem about? WEEDS! LOL! Seriously, thanks sharing another fine poem. :-)
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2017
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Damn weeds, yes, "Unwanted eyesores." I spent the day trying to rid my yard of the unwanted pests, with my potent pesticide. Two broken spray wands with leaking gaskets and I was soaked, ruined my clothes and $200 tennis shoes, and my skin is blistered. Then, I come to read your wonderful poetry to relax and unwind. And what is your poem about? WEEDS! LOL! Seriously, thanks sharing another fine poem. :-)
Comment Written 12-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2017
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Wow... what kind of pesticide did you use? LOL sounds like a killer no pun intended. I am sorry about that.
Thank you very much for reading, my friend :)
namaste,
Gypsy Haijin Sensei
Fanstory Instructor and Poet
Member of the Haiku Society of America
~*~ a new haiku class every month ~*~
<>Haiga class starts on May 1st <>
