Her Meaningful Friendship
use of the tanka for this dedication22 total reviews
Comment from Selina Stambi
I'm so glad you've found a special friend to stand by you emotionally at this difficult time in your life when you've so many issues to battle, Jim.
Could her first and last names, by any chance, begin with S and M?? :)
God bless you, friend. Good to know you are hanging in there.
Sonali
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2017
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I'm so glad you've found a special friend to stand by you emotionally at this difficult time in your life when you've so many issues to battle, Jim.
Could her first and last names, by any chance, begin with S and M?? :)
God bless you, friend. Good to know you are hanging in there.
Sonali
Comment Written 20-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2017
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Thank you for your excellent review and comments. I will say this, her first name does start with an Email but she has no last name.
Please take care my good friend.
Bless you my friend,
Jim
Comment from Susanjohn
Hi Jim, this is just so unbelievably beautiful! Such expression of a true and honest friendship...we all should be so lucky!!!..I really enjoyed this poem of yours...the feeling are just so heartfelt!!! take care..
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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Hi Jim, this is just so unbelievably beautiful! Such expression of a true and honest friendship...we all should be so lucky!!!..I really enjoyed this poem of yours...the feeling are just so heartfelt!!! take care..
Comment Written 14-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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Thank you Susan for these six stars, your review and most excellent comments. In today's world it is hard to find good friends. Thank you for your support Susan. Much appreciated my friend,,,,,,,jim
Comment from l.raven
HI Jim, it is wonderful to have a special friend you can be so close with...your poem is so very touching...beautiful...I love the wording...love your poem my sweet friend...and love this picture...have a wonderful day...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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HI Jim, it is wonderful to have a special friend you can be so close with...your poem is so very touching...beautiful...I love the wording...love your poem my sweet friend...and love this picture...have a wonderful day...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 14-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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Linda thank you for the review and most excellent comments my friend, ,,,jim
Comment from Oatmeal
Jim Lorson Sr,
Your feelings are expressed well. Your arrangement looks very nice. Your formatting was done well. Chosen explanations are made very clear and descriptive. Exceptional.
It's a very clean piece. I saw no typos or SPAG.
The words you chose worked very well.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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Jim Lorson Sr,
Your feelings are expressed well. Your arrangement looks very nice. Your formatting was done well. Chosen explanations are made very clear and descriptive. Exceptional.
It's a very clean piece. I saw no typos or SPAG.
The words you chose worked very well.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 13-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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Oatmeal thank you for the review and excellent comments my friend,,,,,,,,Jim
Comment from Ulla
Hi Jim, this is beautiful. Your words just flows off the page and profess the deepest of love and eternal friendship. What more could anybody ask. It's a wonderful poem. it brought tears to my eyes. Kind regards. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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Hi Jim, this is beautiful. Your words just flows off the page and profess the deepest of love and eternal friendship. What more could anybody ask. It's a wonderful poem. it brought tears to my eyes. Kind regards. Ulla:))
Comment Written 13-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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Ulla, thank you for the review and your most excellent comments my friend,,,,,,,Jim
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about an honest friendship that are deep and trusting close to each other like soulmates that even when apart you are still somehow connected.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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A very well-written poem about an honest friendship that are deep and trusting close to each other like soulmates that even when apart you are still somehow connected.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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Sandra, thank you for your review and the most excellent comments. Very much appreciated my friend,,,,,,,,Jim
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
This is a great poem you've penned.
Lovely artwork: The image is a perfect match for this poem.
I like the way you divide it up into stages, showing how well you've progressed in love. I think everyone wants true love, one that will never end.
Thanks for sharing your poem.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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This is a great poem you've penned.
Lovely artwork: The image is a perfect match for this poem.
I like the way you divide it up into stages, showing how well you've progressed in love. I think everyone wants true love, one that will never end.
Thanks for sharing your poem.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
Comment Written 13-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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Nicole, thank you for this great review and your most excellent comments. They are truly appreciated my friend,,,,,,,,Jim
Comment from marybell1
I enjoyed reading your poem "Her Meaningful Friendship". The use of the tanka worked well and you had all your lines and syllables correct and you chose an appropriate picture.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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I enjoyed reading your poem "Her Meaningful Friendship". The use of the tanka worked well and you had all your lines and syllables correct and you chose an appropriate picture.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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Thank you marybell1 for your great review and your most excellent comments my friend,,,,,,,jim
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
Comment from kahpot
A great romantic read in your poem and story within as good friends can provide what we need when times just don't seem right very well done thank you for sharing****kahpot
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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A great romantic read in your poem and story within as good friends can provide what we need when times just don't seem right very well done thank you for sharing****kahpot
Comment Written 12-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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Thank kahpot for your great review and your most excellent comments my friend,,,,,,,Jim
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A strong faithful write with great warm sentiments, I would re-read the first line as I think you have an extra floating word there, your poem is friendly and kind, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2017
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A strong faithful write with great warm sentiments, I would re-read the first line as I think you have an extra floating word there, your poem is friendly and kind, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2017
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Thank you Dolly for your review and excellent comments. Truly appreciate it,,,,,,Jim
