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Comment from frogbook
Great chapter leaving us waiting for the next move, yet fearing it also. Good to see that Mary stayed strong-I'd like to give William a good kick-haha.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2017
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Great chapter leaving us waiting for the next move, yet fearing it also. Good to see that Mary stayed strong-I'd like to give William a good kick-haha.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2017
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Yes, William is pretty funny. I accidently put this chapter in before the one where he comes home from the airport and Mary doesn't pick him up. Oops. He really loses it. It is great. Thanks froggy
Comment from emptypage
You wrote, "What on earth and you did all this without consulting me?" You need a question mark after "earth." And start a new sentence with "And you did all this...."
You need to look at the spacing here. The advanced editor is better than basic, but it still screws with the spacing sometimes. :
Joe inwardly laughed, if you only knew how much I've changed you would be terrified. "Katherine, I truly liked your idea of a class reunion. Especially, now that our church is facing so much hardship. I think it would be good for all of us if we truly got together and got to know each other well. Besides the church needs our support. (I'd put a line between the first sentence and the rest of that^^^).
I like Mary. Let her roar!
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2017
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You wrote, "What on earth and you did all this without consulting me?" You need a question mark after "earth." And start a new sentence with "And you did all this...."
You need to look at the spacing here. The advanced editor is better than basic, but it still screws with the spacing sometimes. :
Joe inwardly laughed, if you only knew how much I've changed you would be terrified. "Katherine, I truly liked your idea of a class reunion. Especially, now that our church is facing so much hardship. I think it would be good for all of us if we truly got together and got to know each other well. Besides the church needs our support. (I'd put a line between the first sentence and the rest of that^^^).
I like Mary. Let her roar!
Comment Written 11-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2017
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Go Mary is right. Thank you for taking the time to respond. Judy
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
This is a great story thus far.
This chapter is well-written.
Nicely polished.
Free of grammatical errors!
Thanks for the brief description of characters.
Thanks for sharing it.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2017
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This is a great story thus far.
This chapter is well-written.
Nicely polished.
Free of grammatical errors!
Thanks for the brief description of characters.
Thanks for sharing it.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
Comment Written 11-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2017
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thank you, the story is coming along. Gotta keep going. Thank you for taking the time to help me.
Comment from Sasha
Please accept my apology for not reading this book. I am so overwhelmed and behind with so many other authors that I simply cannot add another at this time. I hope this does not offend or upset you, as that is not my intent. I wanted to post this her rather than by personal PM so you could at least get a tiny pump in rating from me. Again, I apologize for stepping aside on this one.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2017
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Please accept my apology for not reading this book. I am so overwhelmed and behind with so many other authors that I simply cannot add another at this time. I hope this does not offend or upset you, as that is not my intent. I wanted to post this her rather than by personal PM so you could at least get a tiny pump in rating from me. Again, I apologize for stepping aside on this one.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2017
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no worries I have always appreciated you. Thank you for your consideration
