As You Plan My Life
Challenge 4-10-1718 total reviews
Comment from MelB
Hi Patricia, this is a nice poem about the Master who plans our life. He does have every day planned and numbered. I sure have found it best to go along with it. Enjoy the journey!
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Hi Patricia, this is a nice poem about the Master who plans our life. He does have every day planned and numbered. I sure have found it best to go along with it. Enjoy the journey!
Comment Written 10-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2017
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Thanks for the lovely review, Melissa. I hope you are doing well.
Comment from cholb22
A beautiful poem!! I guess everything that happens is following some kind of someone's plan?!
Thank you for sharing!!
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2017
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A beautiful poem!! I guess everything that happens is following some kind of someone's plan?!
Thank you for sharing!!
Comment Written 10-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2017
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Thanks for the lovely review,. Blessings for a good day.
Comment from lyenochka
This is beautifully said, Patricia! But in reality, it's really hard to do, to relinquish everything to the Master as we should. So thank you for putting this into verse!
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2017
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This is beautifully said, Patricia! But in reality, it's really hard to do, to relinquish everything to the Master as we should. So thank you for putting this into verse!
Comment Written 10-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2017
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Thanks for the lovely review,. Our lives are a lot more peaceful when we relinquish our all to the Lord.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I've never thought of faith in this way Patricia, as I feel I plan my own life, but your love of God makes you see differently, I wish you well on life's journey, your words are food for though, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2017
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I've never thought of faith in this way Patricia, as I feel I plan my own life, but your love of God makes you see differently, I wish you well on life's journey, your words are food for though, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2017
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Thanks for the lovely review, Dolly. Your reviews are always so welcome.
Comment from Poetic Friend
Patricia,
I love this poem, I particularly like the first sentence in this poem. It reads like a prayer that the Lord performs His will for your life. The lack of punctuation works well to enhance your prayer-poem.
I wrote similar poem awhile back. If you are interested in reading the poem, it is titled "God Plan."
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2017
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Patricia,
I love this poem, I particularly like the first sentence in this poem. It reads like a prayer that the Lord performs His will for your life. The lack of punctuation works well to enhance your prayer-poem.
I wrote similar poem awhile back. If you are interested in reading the poem, it is titled "God Plan."
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2017
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Thanks for the lovely review, PF. I appreciate your reviews always.
Comment from sandy montgomery
This should be the prayer of every heart that belongs to God. It's difficult to determine that will at times. Thank fully you have a great outlet to share your wisdom from. Thank you for sharing your work.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2017
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This should be the prayer of every heart that belongs to God. It's difficult to determine that will at times. Thank fully you have a great outlet to share your wisdom from. Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2017
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Thanks for the lovely review, Sandy. Have a wonderful day.
Comment from Sasha
I am sure God looks at you as his loyal servant and is not disappointed in anything you say or do. Lovely poem filled with a powerful sense of peace. Excellent work with this one.
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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2017
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I am sure God looks at you as his loyal servant and is not disappointed in anything you say or do. Lovely poem filled with a powerful sense of peace. Excellent work with this one.
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Comment Written 10-Apr-2017
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Thanks for the lovely review, Sasha. May your day be blessed.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Patricia,
You did a great job with the picture this challenge. Your words flow well & tell a good story. I can 'hear' you saying this to God. You have shared so much of your life & this is a nice way to show/say that you are now satisfied with how God has helped you make it better. I like the presentation--the colors work well.
Good job & thanks for sharing. Take care. Jan
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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2017
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Patricia,
You did a great job with the picture this challenge. Your words flow well & tell a good story. I can 'hear' you saying this to God. You have shared so much of your life & this is a nice way to show/say that you are now satisfied with how God has helped you make it better. I like the presentation--the colors work well.
Good job & thanks for sharing. Take care. Jan
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Comment Written 10-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2017
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Thanks for the lovely review, Jan. It is always a pleasure to get your reviews.
