A Natural Wonder of The World
A towering landmark in Cape Town4 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Very nicely composed and rhymed poem of this unique place. Image is spectacular. Author's note is very good. I can image the tenseness of waiting for the wind to die down which suspended. Great job. Marilyn
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2017
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Very nicely composed and rhymed poem of this unique place. Image is spectacular. Author's note is very good. I can image the tenseness of waiting for the wind to die down which suspended. Great job. Marilyn
Comment Written 19-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2017
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Thank you,Marilyn, for taking the trouble to join me in celebrating the uniqueness of this natural wonder of the world. The new cable car rotates giving one a 360 degree view of the surrounds.......lower slopes of the mountain, city of Cape Town, harbour, Robben island etc.
Comment from Vijay Kumar V
Beautiful, this is my favourite, "Impression given of white table cloth
Cascading down mountain in linen-like froth
A unique floral kingdom embraces the area
A notable member is the majestic protea "
Thoroughly enjoyed. Good luck for the contest.Namaskaram
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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Beautiful, this is my favourite, "Impression given of white table cloth
Cascading down mountain in linen-like froth
A unique floral kingdom embraces the area
A notable member is the majestic protea "
Thoroughly enjoyed. Good luck for the contest.Namaskaram
Comment Written 19-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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Thank you so much for boosting my confidence. I wrote from my own experience of living beneath this imposing mountain.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Thank you for sharing your poetic ode to this wonderful natural wonder. The 'table' looks inviting from far away, but I imagine that the cable car ride was a bit traumatic. Good luck in the contest,
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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
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Thank you for sharing your poetic ode to this wonderful natural wonder. The 'table' looks inviting from far away, but I imagine that the cable car ride was a bit traumatic. Good luck in the contest,
~patty~ð???
Comment Written 10-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
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Your review is much appreciated.Thank you for taking a ride in the old cable car!
Comment from Mame
Rather enjoyed the originality of your poem. You have certainly recreated the scene in true poetry. I love the way you have rhymed words in an unusual manner as for instance - area and protea and it works. The picture well matches the verse too - you have provided us with an insight into the mood and feelings well. God work!
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
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Rather enjoyed the originality of your poem. You have certainly recreated the scene in true poetry. I love the way you have rhymed words in an unusual manner as for instance - area and protea and it works. The picture well matches the verse too - you have provided us with an insight into the mood and feelings well. God work!
Comment Written 10-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
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I am encouraged by your great review. Thank you so much.
