Canadian inuk shuk
landmark poem4 total reviews
Comment from rama devi
Nice rhymed poem in tribute to those wonderful rock stacks. I love the tone of simplicity and the slant rhymes work well read aloud. Lovely phonetics with all the S, W, L and T sounds. Good flow. Fine feeling. Lovely presentation.
One suggestion:
guiding the Inuit(,)
perpetually.
Warmly, rd
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018
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Nice rhymed poem in tribute to those wonderful rock stacks. I love the tone of simplicity and the slant rhymes work well read aloud. Lovely phonetics with all the S, W, L and T sounds. Good flow. Fine feeling. Lovely presentation.
One suggestion:
guiding the Inuit(,)
perpetually.
Warmly, rd
Comment Written 11-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018
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Thanks for the review and advice. Been reading my poems again and love that feeling of creativity coming over me again. Were you in New York last summer? We are leaving Tanzania for good in April after 21 years and heading to Montreal. Will be staying at Lake Memphrmagog at Mike's log cabin on the water, so not too bad. 10 minutes from my cabin in Vermont. Have a wonderful day, Cheers, j
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How wonderful. Thanks for sharing. I was only in New York for two days last summer, in transit on ym way home to India.
Love,
rd
Comment from BeasPeas
What an interesting thing. I've not heard of the inuk shuk before, but surely a helpful landmark to travelers. Unique. I enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing. Marilyn
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018
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What an interesting thing. I've not heard of the inuk shuk before, but surely a helpful landmark to travelers. Unique. I enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing. Marilyn
Comment Written 19-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018
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Hi Marilyn, boy, this reply is so late. I am back and look forward to catching up with everyone here. Cheers j
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I am in the same boat, Judy. I've been off the site for about a month. Welcome back. Marilyn
Comment from cholb22
Lovely poem and a good picture choice to accompany it!
I love 'pointing the way for the travelling man'
A really good read, and very well written,thank you for sharing :)
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018
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Lovely poem and a good picture choice to accompany it!
I love 'pointing the way for the travelling man'
A really good read, and very well written,thank you for sharing :)
Comment Written 10-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018
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Thanks for the review, very late reply. Cheers j
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
This is a very good Famous Landmark poem you've penned.
You give a vivid detailed description.
The image is lovely and is a perfect fit for the poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Thanks for sharing it.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018
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This is a very good Famous Landmark poem you've penned.
You give a vivid detailed description.
The image is lovely and is a perfect fit for the poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Thanks for sharing it.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
Comment Written 10-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018
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Hi Nicole, sorry for the late reply. I look forward to catching up with the goings on at fanstory. Cheers j
