High-Wired Hot Tempers
not a good place for an argument15 total reviews
Comment from sheena121
Very jolly, made me laugh. I could just about imagine that hapening at a circus. Limericks are not always that easy to write but you have managed with expertise. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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Very jolly, made me laugh. I could just about imagine that hapening at a circus. Limericks are not always that easy to write but you have managed with expertise. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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Appreciate your very nice review. Thanks for the good wishes.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
haha this is great. Good job on the contest prompt. Your limerick is in good order. I do believe line 1 has 7 syllables where the others that it rhymes with have 8. I would make them all the same. [performers instead of partners] We know they are partners--don't have to be married.
Good job, best wishes in the contest, & thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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haha this is great. Good job on the contest prompt. Your limerick is in good order. I do believe line 1 has 7 syllables where the others that it rhymes with have 8. I would make them all the same. [performers instead of partners] We know they are partners--don't have to be married.
Good job, best wishes in the contest, & thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 09-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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Jan , I have to laugh. To explain - to me, the word wire has two syllables: wi-er. Never thought about someone thinking it only had one. (my GA/TX way of talking). wonder if anyone else will comment on that. thanks for your review!
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haha I'm from Texas. But I do think wire has only 1 syl. Here we say fire as 1 like firrre. Jan
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well, I still have some Georgia in me and we say,
fi-uh. :) but you're right, of course.
Comment from MaggieF
Ha ha, this made me smile. You would certainly not choose to fight with your partner just before you went up on the high wire. You would not want to hear your partner say 'bombs away' Enjoyed MaggieF
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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Ha ha, this made me smile. You would certainly not choose to fight with your partner just before you went up on the high wire. You would not want to hear your partner say 'bombs away' Enjoyed MaggieF
Comment Written 09-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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Glad you enjoyed it. thanks!
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Look out below!
There is going to be a loud crash.
That is what happens when an argument occurs in the wrong place.
Touch of humor thrown into this limerick for good measure.
Should make an interesting entry into this contest.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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Look out below!
There is going to be a loud crash.
That is what happens when an argument occurs in the wrong place.
Touch of humor thrown into this limerick for good measure.
Should make an interesting entry into this contest.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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thank you
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
'High-Wired Hot Tempers'- the title certainly grabs the reader's attention.
This is a good poem.
It has humor.
It rhymes.
The image is good and fits the poem perfectly.
The author's notes are appreciated.-Thank you!
Thanks for sharing your poem.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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'High-Wired Hot Tempers'- the title certainly grabs the reader's attention.
This is a good poem.
It has humor.
It rhymes.
The image is good and fits the poem perfectly.
The author's notes are appreciated.-Thank you!
Thanks for sharing your poem.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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thank you kindly!
