Comment from mbroyles2

Excellent

Well done with this poetic style.
I'm amazed at the talent it takes to pull this off with such clarity and pace.
I don't have it in me.
Your words are crisp and full of life.
Almost makes me hungry. :)
Great stuff!
Michael

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017

Thank you so much for dropping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement,
~patty~

Comment from Nikki-Nicole

Excellent

'Food'- the title is an 'eye opener'.
This is a great Pyramid poem.
Each line is a perfect fit.- Just the right amount of syllables.
Great image.- It looks delicious!
Thanks for sharing your poem.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017

Thank you so much for dropping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement,
~patty~

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

For energy, what we need, how we get and wherefrom, poet reminds us and tells how nourishing foods we need to eat; I liked this clarity pyramid, enjoyed the read.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017

Thank you so much for dropping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement,
~patty~

Comment from Commando

Excellent

Commendably penned, Patty! You made me hungry, sweetheart. Awesome Artwork!
And your message is crystal clear. Have a great weekend, and give my love o all.
Bill

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017

Thank you so much for dropping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement,
~patty~

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written Clarity Pyramid. I am happy I could inspire you with my humble poem to try one of your own.

NS. Your last line has only seven syllables instead of eight. An easy fix.

"(Just) What we need for energy"

Suggestion you can use your own change.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017

Hi Sandra; thank you for dropping by to read and review. I fixed the error and I greatly appreciate you pointing it out. Your words of encouragement mean a great deal to me,
~patty~

Comment from Kismetswriter

Excellent

The fruit shapes like a Pizza. LOVE IT.
It only proves that Pizza is good for you.
The words makes the poem sing as good as Demi Lovatio

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 Comment Written 08-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017

Thank you so much for dropping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement. Pizza is its own food group!
~patty~