Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

It is a good idea to keep your pantry full. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is very good imagery.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017

Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your comments and words of encouragement,
~patty~

Comment from Bucketlist

Excellent

Yet another style! I am learning from your Clarity poem. I like the subject, especially the kind you describe " just what we need for energy" it's a good job you show fruit and not junk foods LOL. This was very pleasant to read

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017

Hi; thank you for dropping by to read and review. I knew better than show junk food when I was talking about 'farm fresh,' but this was a challenge to write. I appreciate your kind and encouraging review,
~patty~

reply by Bucketlist on 08-Apr-2017

My pleasure

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Hi Patty - a new form of poetry for me, but reading your informative notes I see you have written a perfect Clarity poem. Great, and very tempting picture - as you say Yummy! All lines have correct syllable count and they make sense and the whole reads well. Very well done. Warm regards Dorothy x

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017

Hi Dorothy; thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your warm comments and nod of encouragement. This was a fun and challenging write,
~patty~

Comment from Oatmeal

Excellent

Mustangpatty,

Nicely effective and impressive. Very well reflected thoughts and expressions.
The line count was within means. This is a neat style. The theme flowed well all through your poem.

There was no SPAG, no typos, no room for improvement.

The words you chose worked very well.

I look forward to seeing you again.

Love you,

Oatmeal

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017

Hi Camille; thank you for dropping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement,
~patty~

reply by Oatmeal on 08-Apr-2017

Patty,

You are very welcome sweetie.

Love you,

Camille

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

Patty, you have done a wonderful job with this format and you have presented it beautifully. I wish that you have great blessings this weekend. Patricia

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017

Hi Patricia; thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement,
~patty~

Comment from Mitchell Brontė

Excellent

Patty, a clarity pyramid that is full of imagery through wonderful words and striking artwork.
I love your line...taken fresh from farm to store, a real wholesome feel to what food should be.
Have a lovely day

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017

Hi; thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement,
~patty~

Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

My, that picture has given me a mighty craving for fresh fruit. A well written and interesting clarity poem with the potential to cause wt gain. Thanks for sharing, my friend~Debbie

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017

Hi Debbie; thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement,
~patty~

Comment from Bill O'Bier

Excellent

Hello Patty:
Thanks for sharing this poem format. It looks very interesting. I loved your poem and the artwork. Cheers and have a great weekend.
Bill~

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017

Hi Bill; thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement,
~patty~

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Yes my friend you have accomplished this form very well the syllable count is correct and the presentation is spot on I enjoyed well done regards Jill

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017

Hi Jill; thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement,
~patty~

Comment from pome lover

Excellent

well, it looks like you adhered to all the rules for this poem -- which certainly are many!
It not only makes sense ( the simple truth) but looks enticing in your pick of picture to go with it.
"Farm fresh" is always good. nice poem.
pome lover

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017

Thank you so much for dropping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement,
~patty~