My Book of Poems 2010-2017
Viewing comments for Chapter 41 "Food"a collection of my poetry
76 total reviews
Comment from Irish Rain
This is so true! I like this 'clarity pyramid', yet one more form I've never tried. I have tried this type of fruit pizza before, cream cheese filling, yummy indeed. Loved this Miss Patty, blessings...
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This is so true! I like this 'clarity pyramid', yet one more form I've never tried. I have tried this type of fruit pizza before, cream cheese filling, yummy indeed. Loved this Miss Patty, blessings...
Comment Written 08-Apr-2017
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thank you for dropping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement, 😀
~patty~
Comment from rjuselius
this is a fine clarity pyramid poem dear patty! it's a hard format, i know, although it looks and seems so easy. the picture enhances the whole poem!
thank you for sharing!
blessigns!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017
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this is a fine clarity pyramid poem dear patty! it's a hard format, i know, although it looks and seems so easy. the picture enhances the whole poem!
thank you for sharing!
blessigns!
rebekka x
Comment Written 08-Apr-2017
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thank you for dropping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement, 😀
~patty~
Comment from Janet Foor
I have not seen this poetry form before but it seems you have met the requirements beautifully. The picture are yummy and it's making me hungry.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017
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I have not seen this poetry form before but it seems you have met the requirements beautifully. The picture are yummy and it's making me hungry.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
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Comment Written 08-Apr-2017
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thank you for dropping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement, 😀
~patty~
Comment from emptypage
I've never seen this type of poem before. It is quite interesting. It seems to be very well executed.
Food...is certainly all the things you say, from the earthy "yummy" to "nature's bounty." I love your descriptions.
But you made me hungry again.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017
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I've never seen this type of poem before. It is quite interesting. It seems to be very well executed.
Food...is certainly all the things you say, from the earthy "yummy" to "nature's bounty." I love your descriptions.
But you made me hungry again.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017
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thank you for dropping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement, 😀
~patty~
Comment from Thomas Bowling
A very good poem. I recently purchased two Grow Boxes. They are the best thing since sliced bread. The seedlings I planted four weks ago have grown to three feet high.
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A very good poem. I recently purchased two Grow Boxes. They are the best thing since sliced bread. The seedlings I planted four weks ago have grown to three feet high.
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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017
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thank you for dropping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement, 😀
~patty~
Comment from CD Richards
Looking at that gorgeous fruit platter makes me drool - luckily, I have a fruit salad in the fridge for lunch. Your poem is a lovely celebration of nature's bounty - and not a piece of dead animal flesh in sight! I think for a first attempt, you've met the form requirements perfectly (I think even if it was your 100th attempt, the same could be said). Very nicely done, thanks for sharing. Craig
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017
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Looking at that gorgeous fruit platter makes me drool - luckily, I have a fruit salad in the fridge for lunch. Your poem is a lovely celebration of nature's bounty - and not a piece of dead animal flesh in sight! I think for a first attempt, you've met the form requirements perfectly (I think even if it was your 100th attempt, the same could be said). Very nicely done, thanks for sharing. Craig
Comment Written 08-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017
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Hi Craig; thank you for dropping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement, 😀
~patty~
Comment from Rlegel99
Who doesn't like a poem about food? This poem flows well. The artwork works well with the piece. The title alone made me want to eat/read. Thank you for sharing this piece of poetry.
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Who doesn't like a poem about food? This poem flows well. The artwork works well with the piece. The title alone made me want to eat/read. Thank you for sharing this piece of poetry.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017
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thank you for dropping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement, 😀
~patty~
Comment from dragonpoet
A well written and illustrated clarity pyramid about most peoples' favorite subject. Food. It reminds us who we have to thank for it.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
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A well written and illustrated clarity pyramid about most peoples' favorite subject. Food. It reminds us who we have to thank for it.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 08-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017
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thank you for dropping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement, 😀
~patty~
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My pleasure.
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Comment from lyenochka
That is an interesting format! It describes food well in the most basic, physical sense. Is the quote from someone in particular? It would be fun if it were a chef.
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That is an interesting format! It describes food well in the most basic, physical sense. Is the quote from someone in particular? It would be fun if it were a chef.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017
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thank you for dropping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement, 😀 The quote is just made up.
~patty~
Comment from w.j.debi
I admit the picture caught my eye, but your verse made my mouth water. Perfect syllable count. Your concise words flow smoothly. Excellent theme and presentation.
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I admit the picture caught my eye, but your verse made my mouth water. Perfect syllable count. Your concise words flow smoothly. Excellent theme and presentation.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017
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thank you for dropping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement, 😀
~patty~
