My Book of Poems 2010-2017
Viewing comments for Chapter 41 "Food"a collection of my poetry
76 total reviews
Comment from Edgar Terrance
Great Concept. Good flow. This is a very basic thing in human life and its something we all look forward to each day. There are so many different kinds of food out there but energy no matter what right? ;)
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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Great Concept. Good flow. This is a very basic thing in human life and its something we all look forward to each day. There are so many different kinds of food out there but energy no matter what right? ;)
Comment Written 09-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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thank you for dropping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement, 😀
~patty~
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, my friend,
I love the beautiful picture. It looks delicious. Nicely composed clarity pyramid. I tried writing one of these once but I failed miserably... hahaha ... I stick to what I do well. Good job!
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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Hello, my friend,
I love the beautiful picture. It looks delicious. Nicely composed clarity pyramid. I tried writing one of these once but I failed miserably... hahaha ... I stick to what I do well. Good job!
Comment Written 09-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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thank you for dropping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement, 😀
~patty~
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Patty, I love the clarity poem, such a wonderful shape, You wrote it well, Oh, s
Sooooooo, Yummy that looks, OMG seriously,lol ~~~~~~Kerry~~~~~~
I've been behind on review, I will hopefully catch up by tomorrow.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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Patty, I love the clarity poem, such a wonderful shape, You wrote it well, Oh, s
Sooooooo, Yummy that looks, OMG seriously,lol ~~~~~~Kerry~~~~~~
I've been behind on review, I will hopefully catch up by tomorrow.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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thank you for dropping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement, 😀
~patty~
Comment from Nan Beeson
Re your Clarity Pyramid about Food.....
Great picture to complement and visibly show what the poem is about.
I found that you followed all the rules, and each line redefined and clarified the meaning of food and the final outcome of energy.. beginning with it being yummy
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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Re your Clarity Pyramid about Food.....
Great picture to complement and visibly show what the poem is about.
I found that you followed all the rules, and each line redefined and clarified the meaning of food and the final outcome of energy.. beginning with it being yummy
Comment Written 09-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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Hi Nan; thank you for dropping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement, 😀
~patty~
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You are welcome Patty.... Nan:))
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You are welcome, Patty... and I think I just replied, but with do it again... LOL!
Comment from MelB
Hi Patty, a very nice job on this poem. Good line and syllable counts. Good use of alliteration. Fruit is good and I love dessert pizza too!
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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Hi Patty, a very nice job on this poem. Good line and syllable counts. Good use of alliteration. Fruit is good and I love dessert pizza too!
Comment Written 09-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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Hi Mel; thank you for dropping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement, 😀
~patty~
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You're welcome.
Comment from BeasPeas
What a beautiful photo. It looks scrumptious. Nicely composed clarity pyramid. I remember writing one of these once, must try it again. Thank you for sharing. Marilyn
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017
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What a beautiful photo. It looks scrumptious. Nicely composed clarity pyramid. I remember writing one of these once, must try it again. Thank you for sharing. Marilyn
Comment Written 08-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017
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thank you for dropping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement, 😀
~patty~
Comment from nuthead
What a cool poetry form. Clarity Pyramid. Thanks for posting the criteria. From what I understand you've matched the criteria well. The first two lines synonymns / clarifying the definition of the title, next lines expanding on that subject, lastly the quote. Might have to try it! Vibrant and delicious-looking fruit picture. You touched on the important elements - nourishing, bountiful harvest, grown from ground, taken fresh to store, and they are an excellent source of energy. Nicely done. :)
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017
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What a cool poetry form. Clarity Pyramid. Thanks for posting the criteria. From what I understand you've matched the criteria well. The first two lines synonymns / clarifying the definition of the title, next lines expanding on that subject, lastly the quote. Might have to try it! Vibrant and delicious-looking fruit picture. You touched on the important elements - nourishing, bountiful harvest, grown from ground, taken fresh to store, and they are an excellent source of energy. Nicely done. :)
Comment Written 08-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017
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thank you for dropping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement, 😀
~patty~
Comment from Dean Kuch
Organic food or foods we grow, pick, and eat right from our own gardens, is some of the healthiest food you can possibly eat.
In the supermarkets and grocery stores, you'll pay a lot more for organically grown vegetables than you will for vegetables grown and transported to the United States from Mexico.
I enjoyed reading your Clarity Pyramid poem on this topic, Patty. As an old farm boy who grows his own veggies and fruits, and raises chickens for their meat and eggs, I could not agree with you more.
Here's to your Happiness & Health.
~Dean
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017
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Organic food or foods we grow, pick, and eat right from our own gardens, is some of the healthiest food you can possibly eat.
In the supermarkets and grocery stores, you'll pay a lot more for organically grown vegetables than you will for vegetables grown and transported to the United States from Mexico.
I enjoyed reading your Clarity Pyramid poem on this topic, Patty. As an old farm boy who grows his own veggies and fruits, and raises chickens for their meat and eggs, I could not agree with you more.
Here's to your Happiness & Health.
~Dean
Comment Written 08-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017
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thank you for dropping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement, 😀
~patty~
Comment from Winslow
Dear Mustang Patty,
I love cooking and eating. Food does nourish the body and soul and I love eating fruit. Red raspberries are my favorite since they are delicious in a pie.
Warm regards,
Winslow
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017
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Dear Mustang Patty,
I love cooking and eating. Food does nourish the body and soul and I love eating fruit. Red raspberries are my favorite since they are delicious in a pie.
Warm regards,
Winslow
Comment Written 08-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017
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thank you for dropping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement, 😀
~patty~
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Patty: What a yummy dessert. Wow, send me the recipe! Great
syllable control and comment at the end. Very creative
and nice that Sandra shared. Wonderful! flylikeaneagle
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Patty: What a yummy dessert. Wow, send me the recipe! Great
syllable control and comment at the end. Very creative
and nice that Sandra shared. Wonderful! flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 08-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017
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thank you for dropping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement, 😀
~patty~
