My Book of Poems 2010-2017
Viewing comments for Chapter 41 "Food"a collection of my poetry
76 total reviews
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
A very interesting poetic form. I like it! I also like the message of your poem. Fresh food always trumps the processed stuff. I have a garden, and enjoy the fresh produce.
Have a great week,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
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A very interesting poetic form. I like it! I also like the message of your poem. Fresh food always trumps the processed stuff. I have a garden, and enjoy the fresh produce.
Have a great week,
Rhonda
Comment Written 10-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
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thank you for dropping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement, and I'm jealous of your garden. We are living in an apartment until we buy a house next year, and I will miss fresh picked produce, 😀
~patty~
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Nothing like it!
Comment from tfawcus
What a delicious poem! A most fruitful offering in the style of the Clarity Pyramid, and with all of the delicacies chosen from the right part of the food pyramid we teach our children in school! Fresh from farm to store is the only way to avoid those pernicious additives that destroy us!
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
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What a delicious poem! A most fruitful offering in the style of the Clarity Pyramid, and with all of the delicacies chosen from the right part of the food pyramid we teach our children in school! Fresh from farm to store is the only way to avoid those pernicious additives that destroy us!
Comment Written 10-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
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thank you for dropping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement, 😀
~patty~
Comment from Samantha B
You clever lady you!
Your poem is effective as it sums up the essence of natural food. It is life giving and should be plentiful. The photo is a good choice.
Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
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You clever lady you!
Your poem is effective as it sums up the essence of natural food. It is life giving and should be plentiful. The photo is a good choice.
Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
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thank you for dropping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement, 😀
~patty~
Comment from Hitcher
I like clarity pyramids, they are fun and challenging to write and when you get them right they can be very rewarding. I enjoyed your bountiful poem and the accompanying artwork, I'm hungry now, ha ha.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
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I like clarity pyramids, they are fun and challenging to write and when you get them right they can be very rewarding. I enjoyed your bountiful poem and the accompanying artwork, I'm hungry now, ha ha.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
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thank you for dropping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement, 😀
~patty~
Comment from whizpurr ^-^
Hi Patty,
What a fine clarity poem! You followed the interesting rules to a tee and your 'foody goody' message came through clearly! :-) Yummy was an excellent word to start with because the food in your well chosen picture really does look yummy! I was going to go to bed without a snack tonight... but after having a look at this one, that is no longer possible!!! Thanks for sharing this great little poem. Smiles, Aggie
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
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Hi Patty,
What a fine clarity poem! You followed the interesting rules to a tee and your 'foody goody' message came through clearly! :-) Yummy was an excellent word to start with because the food in your well chosen picture really does look yummy! I was going to go to bed without a snack tonight... but after having a look at this one, that is no longer possible!!! Thanks for sharing this great little poem. Smiles, Aggie
Comment Written 10-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
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thank you for dropping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement, 😀
~patty~
Comment from write hand blue
An interesting and complex poem. This is not apparent until the Author's notes are read. Mouth-watering and yummy as the poem reads. Good poem...
~Mel~
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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An interesting and complex poem. This is not apparent until the Author's notes are read. Mouth-watering and yummy as the poem reads. Good poem...
~Mel~
Comment Written 09-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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thank you for dropping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement, 😀
~patty~
Comment from Elizabeth Daniels
Yummy food is indeed what we need to survive. Unfortunately, the yummier the food, the more I seem to eat of it. lol You have created your own food pyramid.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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Yummy food is indeed what we need to survive. Unfortunately, the yummier the food, the more I seem to eat of it. lol You have created your own food pyramid.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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thank you for dropping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement, 😀
~patty~
Comment from Wabigoon
Mustang--
Okay, there's food and there's food. There's literal food and there's metaphysical food, maybe. I am not sure why your poem concentrates on one form of food. The literal, it appears. I need, in a poem, a suggestion there is, "food for the soul" somehow. I don't see that here. Hard to get at, conjure. Still worth it.
best
Wabigoon/Jeff
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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Mustang--
Okay, there's food and there's food. There's literal food and there's metaphysical food, maybe. I am not sure why your poem concentrates on one form of food. The literal, it appears. I need, in a poem, a suggestion there is, "food for the soul" somehow. I don't see that here. Hard to get at, conjure. Still worth it.
best
Wabigoon/Jeff
Comment Written 09-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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thank you for dropping by to read and review. Went totally for the literal here - the poetic form didn't give me much room; I appreciate your kind words of encouragement, 😀
~patty~
Comment from Chrissy710
Excellent and well stated a clear picture of our food chain captured in strong words that fit this Clarity pyramid criteria (must give it a go LOL ) A good read Cheers Christine
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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Excellent and well stated a clear picture of our food chain captured in strong words that fit this Clarity pyramid criteria (must give it a go LOL ) A good read Cheers Christine
Comment Written 09-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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thank you for dropping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement, 😀
~patty~
Comment from Thesis
Who couldn't love a poem about food? It brings forth so many visual images of the freshness of farm to table produce, fruit, and a myriad of other delicious products. You succeeded in making me hungry as well as wanting to read more.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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Who couldn't love a poem about food? It brings forth so many visual images of the freshness of farm to table produce, fruit, and a myriad of other delicious products. You succeeded in making me hungry as well as wanting to read more.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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thank you for dropping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement, 😀
~patty~
