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The Little Dog That Wouldn't Let Go

Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Comparisons......North, South."
Subtitle: God Never Lets Go!

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Comment from Mastery
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Hi, Geoff.I found this post much more interesting this time round, because I feel as though I know you better. I have to give yo a lot of credit. You were very involved in your government despite poor health. that is admirable, my friend.

Good Luck, Geoff. You have such a varied background so weave the factual things you did into a story people will enjoy. Bless you, my friend. Bob





 Comment Written 10-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
    Thanks mate. No UNconstructive criticism taken from your help, thanks. I know I have said before but this was only written for the close friend who know me, but the FS family has taken me to their heart and have been a great help. Especially those like your self (and there are a few of you) that really get into the 'down and dirty' to tell me what they really think will work for this. I like your story on Joey too.
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
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This is a GOOD READ!!
I always loved History and U.S. Government during my school days.
This article is well-written.
I hope everyone accepts what Christ did for us on Calvary.
You make an interesting point.
Thanks for sharing this.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
    Thanks Nikki-Nicole appreciate your lovely review....this was a plit of an older chapter that I was told was too large.I posted to another friend who posted a memorial to the Crucifixion today about the Superior in "Fiddler on the Roof" who called the Jews in Anatevka "the Christ Killers" when in actual fact we all put our saviour on the Cross. God Bless.
Comment from MelB
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Hi Geoff, I remember most of this from your book. I had no idea our political parties were opposite in name, until I read your chapter. Still, we are the same on standing for the right things.

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
    AMEn Sis. Yeah I broke up the old chapter as Bob mastery suggested the other was too long and some other reviewers seem to like what I have done. Thanks again, Sis.
reply by MelB on 09-Apr-2017
    You're welcome. Bob is very helpful!
Comment from judiverse
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I'm thankful for your explanation of the differences in your political parties from those in the U.S. You probably have a better understanding of our politics than some of the young people here do. People who get involved in politics probably wind up disappointed, as it's hard to stick to your principles and get anything done. It's sad to think that one's status in a political party would be based on whether he or she drank liquor. Too bad your health did not permit you becoming involved in the Christian Democratic Party campaign. You would have been a good one. judi

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
    Thanks Sis appreciate the great review.I have to thank Bob (Mastery) for his assistance and encouragement to split the old chapter and set this strictly political one up.
reply by judiverse on 09-Apr-2017
    You're very welcome. If something is overly long, it discourages readers. The political stuff was interesting. judi
Comment from Sasha
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I recall reading this before but thank you for the update. My previous review remains the same. Thank you for explaining the political differences between our countries. That was very interesting, and yes, confusing. I am sorry you were not able to be more active because of your health.

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
    Thanks Sasha, appreciate you coming along.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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Thank you so much for explaining the political differences between our countries. That was very interesting.

Thank you for sharing what your history was in your own political adventures. Sorry you weren't able to be more active when asked because of your health.

Take care,
Rhonda

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 Comment Written 09-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
    Thanks, Sis appreciate you coming along. Seems this chapter was more needful than I first realized. Thanks to Mastery (Bob) for suggesting the split of the old chapter.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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Wow I learned a lot in the differences of the areas and the meanings of words...politically correct...I believe.lol
Very well written and it is too bad that your health kept you from doing that which would have been wonderful not only for you but for the people I believe truly

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 Comment Written 09-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
    Thanks barb, much appreciate the great review. Seems this chapter was more needful for my American friends than I first realized. Thanks to Bob (Mastery) for the suggestion to split the old chapter up.