Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

When one is replaced from their homeland sadness is sure to follow. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. Good luck in your contest.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017

And thank you for reading & critique zanya

Comment from Nikki-Nicole

Excellent

This is a great 5-7-5 poem.
It has the right amount of syllables in each line.
The image fits perfectly with the poem.
Great artwork.- Very creative.- Talented.
Thanks for sharing it.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-

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 Comment Written 07-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017

Thanks for reading & critique zanya

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written 5-7-5 poem but also a very sad one too. You used very good descriptive words and great imagery with the art work. Best wishes on the prompt. Teri

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 Comment Written 07-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017

Thanks for reading zanya

reply by Teri7 on 09-Apr-2017

you are so welcome!