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Why The Infants?

To Infants In War Torn Areas

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Comment from Pantygynt
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This needed saying, and you have said it so very well. Already they are tyring to wriggle out out of their responsibilities for this ghastly business.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
    Thank you I appreciate
Comment from loismddavis
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incredibly timely free verse that describes some of the currents of our contemporary life. I wonder why you have capitals but no periods. I believe the word rented should be rent.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017
    Thank you for your timely review, I will make the changes
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
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'Why the Infants' is a title that will surely grab a reader's attention.
This is a beautiful and heart-touching poem.
Thank you for sharing your poem.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017
    Thank you, I appreciate