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Pallid Heir

a short scribble

2 total reviews 
Comment from rspoet
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This is an excellent poem
reads like a free verse, but with an intricate rhyme scheme
If those scribbles matter not,
then there is little reason
Mortality is fixed
What will last longer
the word or the granite?
Fine poem


 Comment Written 06-Apr-2017

Comment from Nikki-Nicole
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This is a good poem.- It rhymes.
Great scribble.
I especially like the line, 'Tomorrow lost to histories rot'.
Thank you for sharing it with us.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2017