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2018 Bernie and Howie Stories

Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Howie and the Snack Ball"
...stories and poems about the boys

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Comment from BeasPeas
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This is so adorable. I could follow every move. Howie and Bernie--I love it. I have 3 dogs and, yes, they all vie for their special spot. They make our lives so wonderful. Thank you for sharing. Marilyn

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2017
    Hi Marilyn; thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed the latest of the Howie and Bernie stories,
    ~patty~
Comment from Teri7
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This is just too cute! That is a darling little dog. he looks so sweet and so much fun. You used very good descriptive wording on here. The only think I didn't like was I could not pet little Howie. Very good work. love, Teri

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2017
    Thank you for stopping by to read and review, Teri. I'm sure if you could pet Howie, you would find his fur soft and cuddly. Thank you for your kind words of encouragement,
    ~patty~
Comment from bookishfabler
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With maddening slowness, the Mistress rolled the ball on the carpeted living room floor. Howie rushed to the noisily rolling ball. Using his front paws, he swiped and kicked at the ball like a soccer player heading for the goal. (My Brutus loves playing with the ball, but mostly the squeaky toys. He always places them in my hands or in Joe's)

I never tried a snack ball though.
hugs heidi

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2017
    Hello again, Heidi; I bought the snack ball as a way to distract the boys if I went out for awhile. Howie loves it, but Bernie really isn't interested. He finds it much easier to get treats from me! Thank you for your encouraging review - there is always more to write about with the boys on hand,
    ~patty~
Comment from Bichon
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Aww, this was an adorable story! I can imagine Howie just rolling around with his snack ball now. Lacey has a kong, I think they might be quite similar. Might have to get a snack ball now, Lacey picks up the Kong and drops it, all the treats then fall out!

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2017
    Hi Chloe; Howie loves the snack ball, and Bernie isn't interested in the least. They have a kong, too, but the treats come out way too easily. Howie will fling it over his head in disgust when its empty. Thank you for stopping by to read and review. I hope you and Lacey are doing well,
    ~patty~
Comment from nuthead
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I so enjoy these stories told from your lovely furry friends perspective. The unconditional love for their mistress, vying for her attention. Adorable stories told with real "voices" and great imagery.

A small typo.
A wayward wandering extra "the" here:

the much coveted the pillow. As he moved,

Enjoyed!

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2017
    Thank you so much for dropping in to read about Howie and Bernie's adventures. Your encouraging words make me smile. Thank you for pointing out the nit. I will go and edit.
    ~patty~
Comment from TAB_that's me
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I have never heard of a snack ball. Sounds like your little doggie likes it:)

Your dog stories are fun and interesting to read.

Teresa

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2017
    Hi Teresa; thank you for stopping by to read and review. Snack balls are SUPPOSED to keep your dog occupied and make them work for their treats. Howie uses his to bully the furniture.
    ~patty~
Comment from Dean Kuch
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Hello, Patty.
Looks like it's time for more misadventures of that lovable duo, Howie & Bernie...

Stretching his front legs out in front of him, Howie settled down for a nap. Of course, he never knew when the Mistress would decide to move, and he would be forced to settle in a new place.
... I can't even go to the bathroom without Gidget, my sixteen-year-old Chihuahua canine companion following after me, Patty.
Talk about separation anxiety! WHEW...

On the TV was one of those court shows, and the people were arguing in annoying voices. How on earth could the Mistress enjoy this stuff? It was beyond Howie's comprehension. ... I gotta agree with Howie, the dog's, viewpoint here, Patty.
It's beyond my comprehension as well.
How, indeed? ...

He loved the Mistress's pillow. In addition to its being so squishy, the pleasant scent of the Mistress permeated the material. ... You must be a frequent bather.
That's a good thing, LOL...
In reality, dogs find scented soaps and body washes foul-smelling while they love the scents of decay and stale dog urine.
Ever observed your doggie rolling around in the yard?
It ain't vanilla-mushmelon body spray he's smelling in the grass.
But, I won't go there...or have I already?

I guess the moral of this tail...errrr, heh-heh... I mean, tale is that when all else fails, choose snacks!

Well done, Mistress Patty.
 photo goodmorndog1_zpsur0u3i2g.gif ~Dean ;)

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2017
    Hi Dean; its always good to see you. Hey, court shows are highly entertaining - I can't believe the things people bring to court! Howie and Bernie try to cook up a story at least once a week - I can almost see them trying to come up with a concept.

    Thank you for your kind words of encouragement. Tell Gidget she needs to give you a break once in awhile.

    ~patty~

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    (Did it work? or are you just seeing a bunch of code?)

reply by Dean Kuch on 06-Apr-2017
    Yep, it worked, Patty.
    I see the happy doggie wagging his tail, LOL.
    There's NO WAY Gidget will give me a break.
    If she ever did, I'd start to think she was sick or something.
    You're very welcome, Patty.
    Take care...
    ~Dean
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2017
    YAY! Thank you for letting me know. I guess its time to get out my HTML notes. I love this stuff!
    ~patty~
reply by Dean Kuch on 06-Apr-2017
    Me too, Patty!
    But you've probably already guessed that by now, LOL...
    ~Dean ;)
Comment from LaRosa
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awww. I thought maybe Bernie was trying to set Howie up to get caught on the pillow. :)
I loved your story. You have Bernie' antics so perfectly described, it feels like I'm there watching.
Don't think I saw any errors..
Good write, for me!

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2017
    Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your comments and encouragement.
    ~patty~

reply by LaRosa on 06-Apr-2017
Comment from Sis Cat
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As a man who has just brought his Chihuahua on vacation with him to Mexico, I enjoy your humorous story on Howie. I can see him:

Howie contented himself with putting his butt as close to the Mistress as the couch would allow.
 
I love the game and trickery both dogs and Mistress play to get desired objects:

The Mistress had the pillow again.  Bernie had the blanket.  Howie didn't care.  He had his snack ball.

This is a delightful, little story. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2017
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    Hi; thank you for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your thoughtful comments.
    ~patty~
Comment from MelB
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The snack ball is a big hit with cats and horses too. This is a fun piece you have written on the two pups playing. Although, I do hope you get your spot back.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2017
    Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your comments and encouragement.
    ~patty~