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2018 Bernie and Howie Stories

Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Howie and the Snack Ball"
...stories and poems about the boys

47 total reviews 
Comment from Hitcher
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I think the magic of having pets is the pure joy they bring to there owners, you cannot script their actions, they live and breathe 'in the moment' and that is priceless. i must confess, I did enjoy the visuals thrown up, caused me to smile one than once : ) Nice!

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2017


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    Thank you for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your comments - glad I could make you smile,
    ~patty~
Comment from whizpurr ^-^
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Hi my friend,
Your writing is so fun and entertaining. You surely imagine yourself into this little fellow's life and give him a voice which expresses his feelings in a delightful manner. It takes a keen power of observation and lots of talent to do this in such a convincing manner. It's a joy to read. Hugs, Aggie

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017
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    Hi Aggie; thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. Your six star rating made my day. I love to write these stories about the dogs and their antics - they are so much fun! I appreciate your kind words of encouragement,
    ~patty~
Comment from c_lucas
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A dog would kill of its treats. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme. Good job.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2017


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    Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I love writing these stories about my dogs. They give me inspiration every day - but I try to limit their stories to once a week or so,
    ~patty~
Comment from Heidi M
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What a cute story about Howie and Bernie. It's funny how Howie loves the snack ball and Bernie doesn't care. It all works out so they're both happy.
Loved this: 'Just as he started to lose his little doggy mind...'
Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017
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    Hi Heidi; thank you so much for dropping by. The dogs continue to inspire me to write more and more stories about them. Bernie is itching for the next story - it will be from his point of view,
    ~patty~
Comment from Bill Schott
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This is a very funny moment you've captured with Howie and Bernie. This insight into the motivations of your pets makes for entertaining reading.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2017


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    Hi Bill; thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I'm glad my writing was entertaining for you. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement,
    ~patty~
Comment from Tpa
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Nothing warms the heart like a doggie tale with your flawless text. I'm sure Howie would make a good soccer player. Your work brought lots of smiles and for me pleasant memories.

GREAT JOB!!

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2017


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    Thank you so much for your kind review. I appreciate your words of encouragement,
    ~patty~
Comment from emptypage
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Howie didn't care. He had his snack ball.

How true!!!

I get trapped in bed at night. Three dogs lie comfortably snoozing, with me trying not to disturb their precious sleep. I can't get my entire body covered up, which makes me nuts because, well, there are vampires and my covers HAVE to come up to my neck, but the dogs are on the quilt and the sheet is tucked under Maggie's head....

I say, "Who wants a bone-bone?" All three pups jump to attention. I yank my covers and dive in while I can. Treats save me every day.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017
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    Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. Its good to know I'm not the only one to offer treats to get my way!
    I appreciate your kind words of encouragement,
    ~patty~
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
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Cute story. I've never tried a snack ball with my dogs. I don't think they have the patience to wait for the treat to fall out. Would probably make them bite me! LOL! :)

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2017


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    Hi Phyllis; thank you for stopping by to read and review. Your stars and comments encourage me to keep writing about the things I love and know best,
    ~patty~
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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Yes my friend this is well written you have Howie sussed give him the snack ball then everybody is content I enjoyed regards Jill

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2017
    Hi Jill; thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I'm glad you enjoyed the latest of Howie and Bernie's stories.
    ~patty~
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Patty, this is just wonderful. How sweet. But nothing is better than the interaction with our pets. Their unconditional love is adorable. I really enjoyed reading this little well written piece. All the best. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2017
    Thank you for stopping by to read and review, Ulla. I'm glad you enjoyed the latest Howie and Bernie story,
    ~patty~