Maria and the Little Girl
The second part of my memoir.2 total reviews
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
Nice title,- 'Maria and the Little Girl'- Two thumbs up!!
It goes well with the story.
Great memoir!
This part is well-written.
Nicely polished.
Free of grammatical errors!
This reminds me of my little girl.- I'm so happy to have her in my life.
A portrait would be beautiful.- Just my opinion.
Thank you for sharing this.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2017
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Nice title,- 'Maria and the Little Girl'- Two thumbs up!!
It goes well with the story.
Great memoir!
This part is well-written.
Nicely polished.
Free of grammatical errors!
This reminds me of my little girl.- I'm so happy to have her in my life.
A portrait would be beautiful.- Just my opinion.
Thank you for sharing this.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
Comment Written 05-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2017
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Thank you SO much for your kind words and positive review.
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very touching and tender story. The little girl must have been precious. I was almost in tears as I read this. Many blessings for a great day. Take care, Patricia
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2017
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This is a very touching and tender story. The little girl must have been precious. I was almost in tears as I read this. Many blessings for a great day. Take care, Patricia
Comment Written 05-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2017
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Thank you Patricia. I still get teary eyed thinking about that tiny little girl sitting by herself on a curb.
Thank you for the review.
