When I Hold You
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Comment from dragonpoet
This poem shows us that God is the speaker's strength or was for a while and it seems at the end that the speaker veered from the path. Maybe using poetry to find the path again. Sometimes poetry can bring happiness to sad moments.
Yes authors do live between fantasy and reality.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2017
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This poem shows us that God is the speaker's strength or was for a while and it seems at the end that the speaker veered from the path. Maybe using poetry to find the path again. Sometimes poetry can bring happiness to sad moments.
Yes authors do live between fantasy and reality.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 04-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2017
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Thank you I appreciate your candid and unique reveiw
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No problem.
dragonpoet
Comment from charlene7190
I find this interesting in the fact it portrays you as such a complicated poet. I feel you were a spiritual person who lost his way but not from something catastrophic but in short, quiet bursts. I totally relate to that so I totally relate to this particular piece of work. Good job
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2017
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I find this interesting in the fact it portrays you as such a complicated poet. I feel you were a spiritual person who lost his way but not from something catastrophic but in short, quiet bursts. I totally relate to that so I totally relate to this particular piece of work. Good job
Comment Written 04-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2017
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I really appreciate your feedback:) I like the fact you were able to see the poem the way I do, and you could relate to it .
