Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written Pleiades poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings and love, Teri

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2017

Thank you, Teri, for stopping by to read and review. I struggled with this poetic form, but I think it ended up turning out just right,
~patty~

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Hi Patty, a perfect pleiades poem, correct in all aspects. You have achieved what you set out to do - that is the self imposed loneliness. Well done on a rather difficult form. Warm rgards Dorothy x

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2017

Hi Dorothy; thank you so much for your glowing review. I really struggled with the poetic form, and it wasn't until I finished did I feel like I had given it polish. Your words of encouragement mean a great deal to me,
~patty~

Comment from Kingsrookviii

Exceptional

Great poem. I was in the rare mood to review and wanted something with substance. I took a peek at a few and found this that I like a lot. I can relate and it speaks to my frame of mind, mood and current motivation. Have a great day. This is very well done. You nailed your objective. Bruce.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2017

Hi Bruce; thank you for stopping by to read and review. I'm so glad that you feel this poem has substance. It was fun to try this poetic form, and though I struggled to find the right words, I've been thankful that it has spoken to so many people. Thank you for the lovely six star review,
~patty~

reply by Kingsrookviii on 06-Apr-2017

You're welcome. BB.

Comment from LaRosa

Excellent

The silence of loneliness vs. the soul's search for serenity.
Very nicely phrased! and...all one has to do is 'walk to the door' to 'save sanity'.
A Pleiades. Really interesting form.
Enjoyed your logical flow of thoughts!

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2017

Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your encouraging comments,
~patty~

reply by LaRosa on 06-Apr-2017

Comment from XGoneX

Excellent

Hi,
You portrayed loneliness very well. Anyone who feels lonely or even sad or depressed at times can relate.
Good and strong word choice.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2017

Hi; I appreciate your warm comments about this poem. It was a struggle to write in this poetic form, but I just kept tweaking the words,
~patty~

Comment from Mame

Excellent

This is so good! Your words swept me into your room of confinement and loneliness. How interesting to learn that other beings can feel the same isolation. So very well portrayed and reflected by the well selected picture of the room. Very moving and cleverly designed with each sentence starting with the letter 'S'. Loved it!

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2017

Thank you for stopping by to read and review. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem,
~patty~

Comment from Bucketlist

Excellent

You hit target!!!! Your poem made me think of all shut Ins for whatever reason.solitude is okay for a while, but the lonliness in your poem often is depression.I liked this style of poetry. Thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2017

Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your comments and encouragement.
~patty~

reply by Bucketlist on 06-Apr-2017

You are welcome

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

Hi
You used the Pleiades form to express the emotions of feeling alone. It can come across as agoraphobia, Loneliness is really awful. I believe we must be aware of those who are in need of company.

Well written,
Mary

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2017

Hi Mary; Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your comments and encouragement.
~patty~

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

Great artwork, the perfect accompaniment for your 'Solitary' Pleiades poem
You've done well with your S's and I like the ending -
Suppose for a moment
Serenity awaits.
Nice one,
cheers.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2017

Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your comments and encouragement.
~patty~

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

Silence, sanity, serenity, soundless state of solitary stamp, sign simplified in short, symphonic status synchronised so sounding script sounds scripture on solitariness.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2017

Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your comments and encouragement.
~patty~