Humanity Project
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Desert Fare"A science fiction book about genetic engineering.
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Comment from Mustang Patty
Thank you for sharing another chapter in this well written novel. Your prose flow well, and the mechanics of your writing are sound. The story line is moving along at a good pace, and you use a combination of internal feelings, along with a smattering of dialogue to advance your theme. Thank you for your author's notes, and the explanations of the characters.
~patty~
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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2017
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Thank you for sharing another chapter in this well written novel. Your prose flow well, and the mechanics of your writing are sound. The story line is moving along at a good pace, and you use a combination of internal feelings, along with a smattering of dialogue to advance your theme. Thank you for your author's notes, and the explanations of the characters.
~patty~
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Comment Written 05-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2017
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Thank you for the wonderful review, Patty! I'm a bit behind on both writing and reviewing as I've been working on a quilt for a benefit. I will get back to yours as soon as I can, because I enjoy your work.
Take care,
Rhonda
