Haiku/Haiga
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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
endless sweat<>coaxes sweetness to the vine (good connection)
chugalug (beer drinking game?)
hahaha... I like the mental image this tiny poem evokes... good job, honey.
Gypsy
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endless sweat<>coaxes sweetness to the vine (good connection)
chugalug (beer drinking game?)
hahaha... I like the mental image this tiny poem evokes... good job, honey.
Gypsy
Comment Written 08-Apr-2017
Comment from Mustang Patty
Your little haiku reminds me that it takes hours of toil to grow the grapes in the fields. The product of these hours is harvested and thrown into large vats - only to become the swill that drunkards imbibe. Thank you for sharing,
~patty~
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Your little haiku reminds me that it takes hours of toil to grow the grapes in the fields. The product of these hours is harvested and thrown into large vats - only to become the swill that drunkards imbibe. Thank you for sharing,
~patty~
Comment Written 03-Apr-2017
Comment from M. Kari Barr
Ah the imagery of the gardener or vineyard worker toiling to plant and grow and tend his vines is captured in that first line...very nice.
I myself am not a fan of end rhyme in a haiku...but I do think I may have done it once myself. :P
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Ah the imagery of the gardener or vineyard worker toiling to plant and grow and tend his vines is captured in that first line...very nice.
I myself am not a fan of end rhyme in a haiku...but I do think I may have done it once myself. :P
Comment Written 03-Apr-2017
