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Comment from Marykelly
The color blue is representative of the melancholic or blue mood and the tangled vine makes a great metaphor for the blues because they are caused by the entanglement of emotions, feelings, attitude.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2017
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The color blue is representative of the melancholic or blue mood and the tangled vine makes a great metaphor for the blues because they are caused by the entanglement of emotions, feelings, attitude.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2017
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Thank you very much, my dear friend,
namaste,
Gypsy Haijin Sensei
Fanstory Instructor and poet
Member of the Haiku Society of America
~*~ a new haiku class every month ~*~
<>o<> Haiku 201 starts on April 5th<>o<>
~<>o<> Haiga starts on May 1st <>o<>~
Comment from krys123
Cheers, Gypsy;
-is kind of something that you can take what you have in your life and write something beautiful share with others. Thus, you have created a great haiku which is to grammatically and grammatically connected lines that show reference to the IV that you've chosen to save and transfer to your new home.
-The satori which I'm aware of being sung by a great writer singer Bob Dylan who wrote the song "Tangled Up In Blue" and is a great reference to this haiku that you use.
-Thanks for sharing and take care and have a good one especially with the one that you love.
Alex
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2017
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Cheers, Gypsy;
-is kind of something that you can take what you have in your life and write something beautiful share with others. Thus, you have created a great haiku which is to grammatically and grammatically connected lines that show reference to the IV that you've chosen to save and transfer to your new home.
-The satori which I'm aware of being sung by a great writer singer Bob Dylan who wrote the song "Tangled Up In Blue" and is a great reference to this haiku that you use.
-Thanks for sharing and take care and have a good one especially with the one that you love.
Alex
Comment Written 04-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2017
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thank you
Comment from Ulla
Hola Gitana, this is just so appropriate for the period of upheaval you're going through right not. A vine will put it's root down, very quickly and that's what i'm seeing you doing. Un abrazo de tu amiga Ulla;)))
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2017
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Hola Gitana, this is just so appropriate for the period of upheaval you're going through right not. A vine will put it's root down, very quickly and that's what i'm seeing you doing. Un abrazo de tu amiga Ulla;)))
Comment Written 04-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2017
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Hola guapa,
Thank you very much, my dear friend,
namaste,
Gypsy Haijin Sensei
Fanstory Instructor and poet
Member of the Haiku Society of America
~*~ a new haiku class every month ~*~
<>o<> Haiku 201 starts on April 5th<>o<>
~<>o<> Haiga starts on May 1st <>o<>~
Comment from Ric Myworld
Sometimes life's little frustrations only serve to make everything even better in the days ahead. When the move is over and everything is finally back in place, to some degree, you can begin a new journey, from a different perspective. Thanks for another fine poem. :-)
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2017
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Sometimes life's little frustrations only serve to make everything even better in the days ahead. When the move is over and everything is finally back in place, to some degree, you can begin a new journey, from a different perspective. Thanks for another fine poem. :-)
Comment Written 04-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2017
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Thank you, Ric, I appreciate it.
Gypsy
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hi Gypsy
So it looks like this week your haiku club are writing about ( vines)
to me it sounds like you somehow got the blues when you untangled the vines that were covering you new home.
Gert
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2017
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Hi Gypsy
So it looks like this week your haiku club are writing about ( vines)
to me it sounds like you somehow got the blues when you untangled the vines that were covering you new home.
Gert
Comment Written 03-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Joan E.
Moving and unpacking have to be among the worst tasks in the world. In a way, I am glad your vine distracted you. I could visualize the tangles, even though I was not familiar with the Dylan song. Best wishes in your new digs- Joan
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2017
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Moving and unpacking have to be among the worst tasks in the world. In a way, I am glad your vine distracted you. I could visualize the tangles, even though I was not familiar with the Dylan song. Best wishes in your new digs- Joan
Comment Written 03-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words sweetie pie.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mastery
Hello, my friend. Moving is fun isn't it? LOL. I like your poem and would love to see it in bloom if it does bloom. sorry you feel a bit bummed today. that's understandable, gypsy. by the way it's Bob Dylan. not Dilan.
Bless you, my friend. Bob
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2017
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Hello, my friend. Moving is fun isn't it? LOL. I like your poem and would love to see it in bloom if it does bloom. sorry you feel a bit bummed today. that's understandable, gypsy. by the way it's Bob Dylan. not Dilan.
Bless you, my friend. Bob
Comment Written 03-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2017
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I know is Dylan, my error. :/
Thank you for the review and kind words words sweetie pie
Gypsy hugs
Comment from dragonpoet
I didn't know you could uproot and replant a climbing vine. I can understand how the tangled vine could also be a metaphor for the way you are feeling. Moving is emotional. You look forward to the future and miss the past.
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2017
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I didn't know you could uproot and replant a climbing vine. I can understand how the tangled vine could also be a metaphor for the way you are feeling. Moving is emotional. You look forward to the future and miss the past.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 03-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words sweetie pie.
Gypsy
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You're welcome, Gypsy.
Joan
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great haiku with layers of meaning. I enjoyed it.
I count 18 syllables, though.
5 in line 1
8 in line 2
5 in line 3
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2017
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This is a great haiku with layers of meaning. I enjoyed it.
I count 18 syllables, though.
5 in line 1
8 in line 2
5 in line 3
Comment Written 03-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2017
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Thank you for the the review and kind words. Good catch! I fixed the error. Thank you.
Gypsy
Comment from Sasha
Moving is one of the most stressful things we can do and one I refuse to ever do again. Excellent Haiku that vividly describes the sadness of leaving a familiar place and trying to take part of it with you. Hope the plant survives. Sorry for missing a few posts, I've been entertaining a guest and had little time for reviewing.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2017
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Moving is one of the most stressful things we can do and one I refuse to ever do again. Excellent Haiku that vividly describes the sadness of leaving a familiar place and trying to take part of it with you. Hope the plant survives. Sorry for missing a few posts, I've been entertaining a guest and had little time for reviewing.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words sweetie pie.
