Get Up and Dance!
Never challenge an old dancin' fool.74 total reviews
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Sis Cat, this is a great entry for the Share A Story In A Poem Contest. It's descriptive tone allows the reader to imagine watching a wallflower bloom into a foot stomping grooving machine. A story very well relayed with an excellent picture to portray the fun of this poem. Love it! Great job on this enjoyable read. ~DD
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2017
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Sis Cat, this is a great entry for the Share A Story In A Poem Contest. It's descriptive tone allows the reader to imagine watching a wallflower bloom into a foot stomping grooving machine. A story very well relayed with an excellent picture to portray the fun of this poem. Love it! Great job on this enjoyable read. ~DD
Comment Written 02-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2017
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Oh, thank you, DD, for your review. I am glad you found this to be a great Share A Story In A Poem and that you can imagine the "wallflower bloom into a foot stomping grooving machine."
Comment from Dean Kuch
I don't know why exactly, Andre, but I have not yet received my sixes that are usually replenished by this time on Sunday morning.
Had I one to reward you with, I would have certainly done so for this wonderfully witty, singsong poem.
So sorry about that, my friend.
This was truly wonderful...
~Dean
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2017
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I don't know why exactly, Andre, but I have not yet received my sixes that are usually replenished by this time on Sunday morning.
Had I one to reward you with, I would have certainly done so for this wonderfully witty, singsong poem.
So sorry about that, my friend.
This was truly wonderful...
~Dean
Comment Written 02-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2017
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Dean, I had the same problem with my allotment of sixes. I used to get them at nine on Saturday. What FanStory did was fix it so that you receive sixes at midnight according to the time zone you are in. My sixes did not appear until midnight.
Thank you for your virtual six review of my "wonderfully witty, singsong poem."
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My pleasure.
Comment from DR DIP
Before I even begin to read your poem Sis, let me say I love the photo.
Nice, really nice It's a poem that must be read out aloud and the author will know exactly how he wants it to be read.
That can make all the difference because the beat is very important in this write.
dip
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2017
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Before I even begin to read your poem Sis, let me say I love the photo.
Nice, really nice It's a poem that must be read out aloud and the author will know exactly how he wants it to be read.
That can make all the difference because the beat is very important in this write.
dip
Comment Written 02-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2017
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Yes, Dip, I practiced reading my poem out loud because if I win the Dancing Poetry Contest I will read my poem before thousands. Reading it aloud helped me craft the beat. Thank you for your review.
Comment from MaggieF
Isn't it amazing where ideas come from, does writing turn us into watchers! I loved this fast paced poem, your imagery is very good, I can see you at that wedding, snapping your fingers in rhythm. I cheered when you got up and showed your spirit. Keep dancing. Enjoyed. MaggieF
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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2017
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Isn't it amazing where ideas come from, does writing turn us into watchers! I loved this fast paced poem, your imagery is very good, I can see you at that wedding, snapping your fingers in rhythm. I cheered when you got up and showed your spirit. Keep dancing. Enjoyed. MaggieF
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Comment Written 02-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2017
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Oh, thank you, Maggie, for your review of my fast paced poem. I am so glad that I got up and danced. Not only was it a great experience and I walked 10,000 steps with my FitBit bracelet, it gave me an idea for this poem. Thank you for your review.
