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Went With the Breeze

Brett returns after an argument

6 total reviews 
Comment from LoannaLois
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I knew immediately the source from which the conversation came! It was flowing right along, it had interest, it set the reader up for the humorous ending. Great conversation.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2017
    thank you very much for your review and the 6! I wish I had a reviewer recommendation left. sorry.
    pome lover
Comment from emptypage
Excellent
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My brother knows a woman who wrote a book called Went with the Breeze in Nashville.

Loved your creativity here...."Vermillion" made me lol. So did "Moo-oo-oo!"

You wrote, "She'll get me back when the cows come home!" Is this a thought? Or did you mean to say "You'll get me..."??

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 04-Apr-2017
    how 'bout if he was talking to himself? :)
    but you're right - shouldn't have put quotes.
    There really is a book with that name? too funny!
reply by emptypage on 05-Apr-2017
    Talking to himself? Italicize.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2017
    was really kidding. you were right.
    pl
Comment from Mustang Patty
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Poor Brett and Vermillion. Will they ever see the love they are giving up on? Or, as it was in Gone with the Wind, was there never any real emotion in that relationship. Simply a want and a need. Thank you for sharing this humorous look at one of the greatest story lines ever written, (in my humble opinion)
~patty~

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 04-Apr-2017
    and thank you! Did you know someone wrote a sequel??? several people wrote one and the the author who the committee felt most followed Mitchell's storyline got the job. It is called "Scarlett", by Alexandra Ripley. - in case you're interested.
reply by Mustang Patty on 04-Apr-2017
    I read the book as soon as it came out. I liked it, but my mother saw it as blasphemy. It was entertaining and Scarlett and Rhett finally found themselves in a place to live their love. ~p~
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2017
    that's funny. I guess because it wasn't by Margaret, or maybe she didn't think they should have gotten back together.
    K
Comment from Brett Matthew West
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An interesting spin on Gone With The Wind.

Seems Vermillion got her's.

Some people just never get the message, do they?

Moo-oo-oo!

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
    very moo-ooed by your comments
Comment from nuthead
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This is clever and fun. The language was well done, consistent. Love the diddle-dee-squat, toodle-oo, and "Hey, are you wearing the living room curtains? Cool!"

Well done!

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
    thank you kindly!
    pome lover
Comment from GoodHearted Woman
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Oh, just excellent! Took my humor-meter for one heck of a ride!
I guess my first clue was the curtains and suddenly the lady's part started to sound high and English! Laugh, laugh. Would love to know the thinking process that got you there, since I find that's half the fun (not to mention success) of writing. Good job. Made
my evening. GoodHearted woman

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
    well, and you've made mine! thank you kindly!
    "they" say I have no review recommendations - seems like I haven't had any for ages. anyway the thought's there.
    pome lover