My Book of Poems 2010-2017
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Nightly Chatter"a collection of my poetry
44 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This tells evidently the state of uncomfortable love affairs at this point and how one tries to bring in the matter normal; sharing of mistaken state is for resolution.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
This tells evidently the state of uncomfortable love affairs at this point and how one tries to bring in the matter normal; sharing of mistaken state is for resolution.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your comments and encouragement.
~patty~
Comment from dragonpoet
Such a cute picture for such a sad story. This seems like a relationship that should end. Sounds like the answer to the questions in the first stanza are no. It doesn't seem like much love making happens in this couple.
I think you did well.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
Such a cute picture for such a sad story. This seems like a relationship that should end. Sounds like the answer to the questions in the first stanza are no. It doesn't seem like much love making happens in this couple.
I think you did well.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 01-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your comments and encouragement.
~patty~
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No problem, Patty.
Joan
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
This was wonderful Patty, always brave to try new formats and both are excellent.
The first a need we all crave ....reassurance.
The second the routine of everyday mature relationships.
Perfectly executed in the 5-7-7 format.
Have a lovely evening
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
This was wonderful Patty, always brave to try new formats and both are excellent.
The first a need we all crave ....reassurance.
The second the routine of everyday mature relationships.
Perfectly executed in the 5-7-7 format.
Have a lovely evening
Comment Written 01-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your comments and encouragement.
~patty~
Comment from Bichon
Such a great sedoka, haven't read something like this before but I really liked it. I love the layout, can easily distinguish the conversation from the next, hope you'll do more like this!
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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
Such a great sedoka, haven't read something like this before but I really liked it. I love the layout, can easily distinguish the conversation from the next, hope you'll do more like this!
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Comment Written 01-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your comments and encouragement.
~patty~