Comment from damommy

Excellent

Oh, I like this very much.

It's almost like a small child playing in the rain.

Good imagery with words only. Photo is a bonus.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017

Thanks for your read and your comments.

Comment from smreel

Excellent

I like how the thunder clash seems to awaken the seedling like a summer alarm clock and the leaves are personified as arms. Good job with the 5-7-5. Good luck with the contest!

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017

Thank you for your read and the comment.

Comment from GoodHearted Woman

Excellent

Seedling awakens, arms out clinched it for me. So original I felt.
excellent photo depicting spring. Good luck in the contest.
Good
Hearted
Woman

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017

Thanks for the read. I know would have liked to use spring but not enough syllables.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

This is an awesome contest entry. Good job with the prompt--all syllables are correct per line. Your topic is well expressed & refreshing, too.

Good job & best wishes in the contest.

Thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017

Thanks for the review and the encouragement.

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is a fine entry for the 5-7-5 contest
with exact syllables at the form
Excellent imagery in the thunder/seedling
with good alliteration of "s" sounds
This is a little more like spring with the seedling
but it can work for summer, too
Perfect picture to match
Nicely done
Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017

Thanks for the read and the comments. Yes, I thought about spring but it is only one syllable.