Difference Between Men and Women
A bit of fun. Apologies all around.16 total reviews
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Author,
This was a very interesting look at the differences in the sexes. It seems we are QUITE separated, huh? *smile* You pointed this out in fun and charming ways. Great job! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2017
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Dear Mystery Author,
This was a very interesting look at the differences in the sexes. It seems we are QUITE separated, huh? *smile* You pointed this out in fun and charming ways. Great job! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 30-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2017
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thanks, Robyn!
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
This is a well-conceived, humorous piece which gave me a chortle. It does need a little tidying up though.
Husband: "Yep" / Husband: "Nope" - both of these pieces of dialogue need closing punctuation before the closing speech marks.
Husband: "what's wrong?" - dialogue should start with a capital letter.
"Okay. Right. See 'ya."- no apostrophe necessary in front of ya as it isn't an abbreviation.
"groan, moan - capital to start.
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2017
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Hi there,
This is a well-conceived, humorous piece which gave me a chortle. It does need a little tidying up though.
Husband: "Yep" / Husband: "Nope" - both of these pieces of dialogue need closing punctuation before the closing speech marks.
Husband: "what's wrong?" - dialogue should start with a capital letter.
"Okay. Right. See 'ya."- no apostrophe necessary in front of ya as it isn't an abbreviation.
"groan, moan - capital to start.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 30-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2017
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Giraffmang - you sure you aren't an English professor?? Thanks for catching my mess. I had originally put things in it that I regretted and raced back to change -delete them, so was in a hurry to get it back out there. But - seems I was in too much of a hurry. Wish you were my guardian editor! thanks again.
pome lover
Comment from Mustang Patty
LOL! I think you have identified some of the major differences between the sexes. He is much more laid back, while she is a bit more complicated. Your words flow well, and the piece is easy to read and follow. Thank you for sharing,
~patty~
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2017
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LOL! I think you have identified some of the major differences between the sexes. He is much more laid back, while she is a bit more complicated. Your words flow well, and the piece is easy to read and follow. Thank you for sharing,
~patty~
Comment Written 30-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2017
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thank you!
Comment from Marvin Calloway
You seem to know a lot about the differences. Well done, I guess. I can only speak for men.
There's much accuracy in this piece. Also much humor.
I'm a little concerned about "The sex talk."
Marv
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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017
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You seem to know a lot about the differences. Well done, I guess. I can only speak for men.
There's much accuracy in this piece. Also much humor.
I'm a little concerned about "The sex talk."
Marv
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Comment Written 29-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017
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'twasn't supposed to be serious. just in jest.
pl
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you're right . sorry about that.
Comment from Bucketlist
Unfortunately, you hit bullseye with this comparison. No, wait! maybe you missed the target.
Oh, just let me decide which restaurant to go to first. But on the other hand, I should review this first.
Guy - That's a good, true poem. Let's go get a beer
Thanks for my chuckle of the evening
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017
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Unfortunately, you hit bullseye with this comparison. No, wait! maybe you missed the target.
Oh, just let me decide which restaurant to go to first. But on the other hand, I should review this first.
Guy - That's a good, true poem. Let's go get a beer
Thanks for my chuckle of the evening
Comment Written 29-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017
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and thank you kindly for the 6-er! glad you got a chuckle.
pome lover
Comment from Thal1959
Very nicely written - comparing general attitudes and actions between the two genders. Though I get the distinct feeling this was written by a man! Am I right?
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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017
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Very nicely written - comparing general attitudes and actions between the two genders. Though I get the distinct feeling this was written by a man! Am I right?
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Comment Written 29-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017
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nope. :) that's why I said, apologies all around. you have to admit it's kinda rings a bell??
pome lover
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Darn! I'm glad I didn't put money on it.
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glad you didn't, 2 :)
