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Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "haiku(fragrant white blossom)"A collection of haiku written by FanStory Poets
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Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Stunning write as always Ulla, this is utterly beautiful. Very well done I can imagine the sight and scent. This really is wonderful, full of images of beauty, Kindest regards Meia xx
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017
Stunning write as always Ulla, this is utterly beautiful. Very well done I can imagine the sight and scent. This really is wonderful, full of images of beauty, Kindest regards Meia xx
Comment Written 29-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017
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Awwww, thank you so much, Meia, how pleased I am. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment from Kingsrookviii
I love this and took a picture in my back yard yesterday that is very similar. I don't know trees like you, but I think mine is a more pink varies of this. It always makes for a great picture in Spring. Anyway, I go around my large yard and take lots of pictures of flowers and plants that have been there for decades. I have what used to be an old farmstead, complete with an abandoned chicken coup, tons of plants.
Anyway, I love this poem and the inspirational tree. This middle line that you've used is SO lovely in particular. This evokes a visual image of as if seeing this tree and scores of others waving in a breeze that has that scent that along with such views that Spring is glorified and almost seared into memory, forever. Love this one. Bruce.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017
I love this and took a picture in my back yard yesterday that is very similar. I don't know trees like you, but I think mine is a more pink varies of this. It always makes for a great picture in Spring. Anyway, I go around my large yard and take lots of pictures of flowers and plants that have been there for decades. I have what used to be an old farmstead, complete with an abandoned chicken coup, tons of plants.
Anyway, I love this poem and the inspirational tree. This middle line that you've used is SO lovely in particular. This evokes a visual image of as if seeing this tree and scores of others waving in a breeze that has that scent that along with such views that Spring is glorified and almost seared into memory, forever. Love this one. Bruce.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017
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Wow, Bruce, you've just made my day. Thank you so very much. I'm so pleased that this resonated with you. Thanks again. Ulla:))
Comment from Sasha
Awesome visual imagery in this one. We have pink one in our neighborhood (just flowering, no fruit) and they were stunning and every street was lined with them. Great work, as always, with this haiku. I enjoyed it immensely.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017
Awesome visual imagery in this one. We have pink one in our neighborhood (just flowering, no fruit) and they were stunning and every street was lined with them. Great work, as always, with this haiku. I enjoyed it immensely.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017
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Thanks a lot, Sasha. When the cherry trees flower here, the mountain is ablaze. It's a sight to behold. We have loads of walkers just coming to watch it. That's right the pink ones are for decoration only, bit the are beautiful as well. Thanks again. All the best. Ulla:)xx
Comment from damommy
What a great picture you've painted with your words alone. I can just see the mountainside covered in white blossoms.
"Sweet cherry dreams" is a great line.
You do well with photography, too, it seems. 8-)
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017
What a great picture you've painted with your words alone. I can just see the mountainside covered in white blossoms.
"Sweet cherry dreams" is a great line.
You do well with photography, too, it seems. 8-)
Comment Written 29-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017
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Thank you so much. I'm glad yo liked it. It's a sight to behold. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment from Mustang Patty
Your lovely picture and haiku tell the story of the cherry blossom. Does the abundance of blossoms really lead to a bumper crop? I imagine that the weather must have something to do with it. In Portland, OR, the trees are dripping with blooms. Thank you for sharing,
~patty~
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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017
Your lovely picture and haiku tell the story of the cherry blossom. Does the abundance of blossoms really lead to a bumper crop? I imagine that the weather must have something to do with it. In Portland, OR, the trees are dripping with blooms. Thank you for sharing,
~patty~
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Comment Written 29-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017
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Hi Patty, thanks so very much. Yes, weather can change it all. if we get rain at the wrong time it can ruin the blossom. And then comes the time when the fruit is ripe to pick. If we get rain then the cherry will split and cannot be sold. So a lot can still go wrong. But at least it looks as if it could be a very good year after several very poor ones when we had the drought. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
fragrant white blossom <>cascades down the mountainside
sweet cherry dreams
good connection between phrase one and two
the satori is a lovely observation that made me smile
Good job, honey,
gypsy
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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017
fragrant white blossom <>cascades down the mountainside
sweet cherry dreams
good connection between phrase one and two
the satori is a lovely observation that made me smile
Good job, honey,
gypsy
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Comment Written 29-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017
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Hola, Gitana, thank you very much. Un besito. Ulla:)))