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The Road to Utopia

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Creating a Sane Society

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Comment from mkflood
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nice dream and syfy story..yeah i said it. and oh btw you left the democrats out of being the same as the republicans in your rantings. they lie just like the republicans while grabbing some of the pact money from businesses. they have been doing that for decades. its sooooo easy to pass judgement on these business for global warming when the average hungry poor family who is trying to survive dont really care. when someone is smug with statements and comparing their life to others(who is not in poverty) by telling others how they must live. its pretty arrogant to talk the talk instead of leading by example on helping others. dont ya think? oh yeah dont take this hostile..im just telling it like it is. you do realize that the average american dont really give a shit about elections until its time to vote for president. the sad part is congress, who has no limitations in office are the ones truly responsible no matter what party. here is a good example of what your up against in the mentality of the average american. i was asked one time during Obama's relection who did i vote for romeny? or obama? i paused for a moment ready to say none of your damn business till the statement was thrown at me "well if you didnt vote for romney then you voted for obama"..i grinned and then replied.." i guess you were never taught how to read? you do realize there was 7 different parties on that voting ticket right?". im a proud independent that dont follow blindly to one party. however through out this world there is a "Golden Rule". "yea who has the gold makes the rules". we can holler..we can piss and moan..we can cry..we can even stamp our feet..unless the majority is on board with the same thought and dont have empty stomachs.."its all a pipe dream". still cool syfy story and its like many others i have read or seen on tv. i do thank you selecting my work even though by now you might be changing it. lolol..as a veteran who has defended this country and constitution we have the right of freedom of speech. whether everyones listens or not..wink wink. good story and thanks again..mkflood

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017
    I voted for Dr. Jill Stein. I am in full agreement that the current major parties are mere puppets. Thanks for the input...John
reply by mkflood on 29-Mar-2017
    thumbs up!!!
Comment from Mustang Patty
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Thank you for sharing another chapter in this story. It appears that the characters are finding a world that is built on the principles you put forth. It would be nice to believe there is indeed an Utopia here somewhere. Your writing continues to run smooth, and inform the reader.
~patty~

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017
    Thank you much. The next chapter will be very long...John