Chasing of the Wind.
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "Doctor Pascal Mendez Seeks Answers"Conflict between the Human Needs and the Divinity
2 total reviews
Comment from DonandVicki
A very good and thought-provoking spiritual story. I tried to come up with some constructive criticism but I think you have done a superb job on this story. You pulled me in with your opening line.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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A very good and thought-provoking spiritual story. I tried to come up with some constructive criticism but I think you have done a superb job on this story. You pulled me in with your opening line.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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Thanks for your review and comment. I am also pulled into this story by the spiritual message of Jesus that got sidelined by the main stream religion. I am hoping to bring in a closure to this novel that will leave readers to think about our current status and outlook towards suffering humanity all over the world. My warm regards and best wishes.
Arun
Comment from His Grayness
Generally, I rate all writing by the amount of "GRIP' and capture it pulls upon the reader and while I found this work to be unusually abstract, I could not really dig into the story. Perhaps I'm entering here amid-ship and not well introduced. With that caveat, my stars focus on the quality of writing in the material I was able to read and thank this author for a fine experience! HIS GRAYNESS
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2017
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Generally, I rate all writing by the amount of "GRIP' and capture it pulls upon the reader and while I found this work to be unusually abstract, I could not really dig into the story. Perhaps I'm entering here amid-ship and not well introduced. With that caveat, my stars focus on the quality of writing in the material I was able to read and thank this author for a fine experience! HIS GRAYNESS
Comment Written 26-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2017
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I agree with you. A chapter in a novel really does not stand by itself for someone to understand where the story is going. The small box where some information about the novel is given is too small to give a synopsis. I gripe and whine to Fanstory to improve this area and hope for a better opportunity to give some understanding of work posted. Thanks for your comment and ranking. Best wishes and regards.
Arun
