Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello, Michael,

beautiful haiku about a perfect rose... is there such a thing?

3/6/4 syllables with a good connection between lines one and two. The satori made me think about beauty and perfection. I thought of beautiful girls and how most beautiful girls I know have terrible personalities, perhaps that is what your satori is about.

Good job, honey,

Gypsy

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2017

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Mikey, this is an excellent haiku red roses being one of my favourite flower. Two first lines connect grammatically and the satori is a true aha moment. Well done. All the best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2017

Hi, Ulla
Nice to hear from you. So pleased you liked this. Trying to keep up with the weekly challenge. At least one thing, yes?
Thanks a million, mikey

reply by Ulla on 28-Mar-2017

Too right! Ulla:))

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

To gaze on one rose or a king's garden full is to marvel at the beauty and brilliance of their colors all reaching for life a great visual and memorable piece thank you****kahpot

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2017

Comment from Lu Saluna

Excellent

this is very pretty
There is wonderful alliteration with the "S"
A rose is truly beautiful and your satori, "effortless life" is bang on.
They are beautiful all by themselves. Roses stand alone, set apart from all other flowers, Wonderful haiku.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2017