Comment from Hitcher

Exceptional

Please! Continue...ð??? now that is how you write a sensual and very seductive Tanka. I tip my hat friend, my kind of poetry with smoking hot visuals....loved it!!

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017

LoL ... somehow, I would have guessed your response. Thank you for the review, my friend,

Thank you very much, my dear friend,

namaste,


Gypsy Haijin Sensei
Fanstory Instructor and poet
Member of the Haiku Society of America
~*~ a new haiku class every month ~*~
<>o<> Haiku 201 starts on April 5th<>o<>
~<>o<> Haiga starts on May 1st <>o<>~

Comment from Mark Schardine

Excellent

At first there must be silence, then the person must find exactly the right words to say. Expectations are never explained but must be met.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017

Thank you very much, my dear friend,

namaste,


Gypsy Haijin Sensei
Fanstory Instructor and poet
Member of the Haiku Society of America
~*~ a new haiku class every month ~*~
<>o<> Haiku 201 starts on April 5th<>o<>
~<>o<> Haiga starts on May 1st <>o<>~

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

Okay...Wow! Again you have managed to capture my full attention with your lovely poetry, Gypsy. My participles are no longer dangling. Very hot, as always. Don

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017

LoL. Dangling participle? LoL

Thank you for the review and kind words words, sweetie pie,

Gypsy

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Smiles Gypsy,
you certainly know to raise my aging eyes with you very sensual way of how one titillates their self for his love one to plea ( I myself wonder what is the Magic Word?)

Gert

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2017

Thank you, my friend, the magic word is please.

namaste,


Gypsy Haijin Sensei
Fanstory Instructor and poet
Member of the Haiku Society of America
~*~ a new haiku class every month ~*~
<>o<> Haiku 201 starts on April 5th<>o<>
~<>o<> Haiga starts on May 1st <>o<>~

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A sensual and tantalising write full of promise and excitement, one word and it all unfolds and magical moments occur, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2017

Thank you, my friend,

namaste,


Gypsy Haijin Sensei
Fanstory Instructor and poet
Member of the Haiku Society of America
~*~ a new haiku class every month ~*~
<>o<> Haiku 201 starts on April 5th<>o<>
~<>o<> Haiga starts on May 1st <>o<>~

Comment from Ulla

Exceptional

Hola Guapa, que maravilla! Me encanta. This is exquisite. That says it all. The erotic undertones are wonderful. Congratulations. Que poema mas especial ...
Un abrazo de tu amiga Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2017

Gracias, guapa, :)

namaste,


Gypsy Haijin Sensei
Fanstory Instructor and poet
Member of the Haiku Society of America
~*~ a new haiku class every month ~*~
<>o<> Haiku 201 starts on April 5th<>o<>
~<>o<> Haiga starts on May 1st <>o<>~

Comment from Douglas Paul

Exceptional

I do think you captured the essence of the early tanka. This one is very erotic and really taps into the emotions and anticipation of love making. Well done, my friend

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2017

Thank you, my friend :)

namaste,


Gypsy Haijin Sensei
Fanstory Instructor and poet
Member of the Haiku Society of America
~*~ a new haiku class every month ~*~
<>o<> Haiku 201 starts on April 5th<>o<>
~<>o<> Haiga starts on May 1st <>o<>~

Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson

Exceptional

Wow, Gypsy That was incredible. The want, the desires were immaculately portrayed in this write, absolutely exquisite: Your words and the sexy pictures went hand and hand. You are on fire Ms. Gypsy Rose. ~Kerry~

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2017

Thank you, my friend :)

namaste,


Gypsy Haijin Sensei
Fanstory Instructor and poet
Member of the Haiku Society of America
~*~ a new haiku class every month ~*~
<>o<> Haiku 201 starts on April 5th<>o<>
~<>o<> Haiga starts on May 1st <>o<>~

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

Oh, my goodness! Those gyrating shadows on the wall, though not all vividly visible, twist and contort my imagination as my body and mind feel every move. Thanks for the pleasure of reading another of yours and the other poems that have use so few words to etch images in my brain. Great job. :-)

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2017

Thank you, my friend :)

namaste,


Gypsy Haijin Sensei
Fanstory Instructor and poet
Member of the Haiku Society of America
~*~ a new haiku class every month ~*~
<>o<> Haiku 201 starts on April 5th<>o<>
~<>o<> Haiga starts on May 1st <>o<>~

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

HI Gypsy,
I enjoyed this sensual tanks . I enjoyed reading and also visualizing, I also love the added photos, so erotic. The music is just beautiful, My sister is a belly dancer I can just imagine her dancing to it. I particularly enjoyed the notes about how women plight, which is still going on today

Well done, Mary

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2017

Thank you for the review and kind kind words sweetie sweetie pie.

Gypsy hugs