Comment from MLEaton

Excellent

An emotive and comforting poem, beautifully presented. I always wonder at how much time and effort it takes to craft what appears to be a simple poem. Great job! Well done. I'm sure it will do well in the competition.
Marion:)

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2017

Thanks for the review Marion. What I learned was to find the perfect poem style to match the message. Sometimes a haiku is just enough to get the message across. Cheers, j

Comment from JACK2

Excellent

nicely worded with plenty of empathy great story telling with very sincere humanistic touch on this poem. You found great vulnerability and highlighted it cleverly penned.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017

Thanks for the encouraging review. Sometimes just having someone give you a hug is stronger than words. Have a nice week end, cheers,j

reply by JACK2 on 25-Mar-2017

you sure said a mouthful cause there is nothing like a good hug.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written empathy poem. You used very good descriptive wording and the art work was great for the imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing. Best wishes in the prompt! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017

Thanks for the encouraging review. Sometimes we just need a hug and no words. Have a nice week end, cheers, j