Humanity Project
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Hard Truths"A science fiction book about genetic engineering.
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is a very honest discussion that is needed to be had by almost every human alive. It searches the soul. I am glad you added it to your post. I do really like this story.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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This is a very honest discussion that is needed to be had by almost every human alive. It searches the soul. I am glad you added it to your post. I do really like this story.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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You're right, they are dealing with a deeper issue, and it is something people need to think about their reaction to. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review the chapter, and to find the deeper meaning!!
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Archie turned around and continued digging. His small shovel moved through the virgin soil as easily as beach sand. He had no idea what the future held for any of them, except they would never be the same again. This was going to be a bigger news story than if he had stumbled across a spaceship complete with live aliens. These strangers were homegrown.' Your work continues to be fantastic, your story compelling, very kindest regards and well done, Meia (ps: I loved the paragraph above).
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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Archie turned around and continued digging. His small shovel moved through the virgin soil as easily as beach sand. He had no idea what the future held for any of them, except they would never be the same again. This was going to be a bigger news story than if he had stumbled across a spaceship complete with live aliens. These strangers were homegrown.' Your work continues to be fantastic, your story compelling, very kindest regards and well done, Meia (ps: I loved the paragraph above).
Comment Written 26-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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Thank you, Meia. I'm glad you liked the chapter, and that particular chapter, my friend. Thanks for taking the time to read and review,
Rhonda
Comment from MelB
His small shovel moved through the virgin soil as easily as beach sand. - great description!
A nice conversation between the two characters. She isn't ready to trust him yet, but maybe in time she will.
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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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His small shovel moved through the virgin soil as easily as beach sand. - great description!
A nice conversation between the two characters. She isn't ready to trust him yet, but maybe in time she will.
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Comment Written 26-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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Thank you for the sweet review! I hope all is going well with you!
Take care,
Rhonda
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You're most welcome. I'm hanging in there.
Comment from mbroyles2
This is a wonderful chapter that shows that Archie and Ayala are starting to bond but that Ayala still has reservations.
There is wonderful dialogue and a sense of worry on how Ayala and Koko will fit into the new world.
But first they must make a rescue attempt.
looking forward to the next chapter.
Michael
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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This is a wonderful chapter that shows that Archie and Ayala are starting to bond but that Ayala still has reservations.
There is wonderful dialogue and a sense of worry on how Ayala and Koko will fit into the new world.
But first they must make a rescue attempt.
looking forward to the next chapter.
Michael
Comment Written 26-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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Thank you for the brilliant review, my friend! Thank you for the wonderful six stars!!
I'm glad the dialogue worked well. I've actually gone back and added a bit more description, although it's still a bit heavy on the conversation.
Thanks for everything.
Rhonda
Comment from apky
So far thoroughly enjoying the story. The lines below I find terrific:
I was nice and didn't ask if he knew from personal experience.
We're just widening out a sleeping area, not digging to the next county.
I have a feeling we're going to come off as lab rats--a fact that may be more attractive to you, the son of a scientist, than to me, the subject.
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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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So far thoroughly enjoying the story. The lines below I find terrific:
I was nice and didn't ask if he knew from personal experience.
We're just widening out a sleeping area, not digging to the next county.
I have a feeling we're going to come off as lab rats--a fact that may be more attractive to you, the son of a scientist, than to me, the subject.
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Comment Written 26-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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Hi, apky!! Thank you for the wonderful review, my friend. I appreciate your comments and time.
Rhonda
