Lack of Evidence or Sense
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Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5 on Obama Wire-Tapping, Lack of Evidence or Sense, has the syllable count right and allows that the tapping in Trump Tower may be those lost marbles rolling around.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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This 5-7-5 on Obama Wire-Tapping, Lack of Evidence or Sense, has the syllable count right and allows that the tapping in Trump Tower may be those lost marbles rolling around.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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Ha-thanks much, Bill.
Comment from Moon baby
I think your artwork is hilarious! Getting to the truth is another thing. All politicians sound great but do little to back their promises. I don't think there has ever been a leader that isn't corrupt in one way or another. But, Trump may not have gone to finishing school, but he does have some good ideas, not all but some. Really like the artwork though!
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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I think your artwork is hilarious! Getting to the truth is another thing. All politicians sound great but do little to back their promises. I don't think there has ever been a leader that isn't corrupt in one way or another. But, Trump may not have gone to finishing school, but he does have some good ideas, not all but some. Really like the artwork though!
Comment Written 25-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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Thanks much for reading.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a good job with the rules of the prompt. Good job. The syllable counts per line are correct.
Best wishes in the contest. Jan
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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You did a good job with the rules of the prompt. Good job. The syllable counts per line are correct.
Best wishes in the contest. Jan
Comment Written 25-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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Thanks much.
Comment from nuthead
I've been reading these little 5-7-5 poems on the alleged Obama Wiretapping for a few days. This is a good one. Short but the sentiment is clear and you threw in a perfectly fitting rhyme. Well done. Love the image. Hehe
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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I've been reading these little 5-7-5 poems on the alleged Obama Wiretapping for a few days. This is a good one. Short but the sentiment is clear and you threw in a perfectly fitting rhyme. Well done. Love the image. Hehe
Comment Written 24-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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Thanks much for reading and your thoughtful comments.
Comment from lyenochka
Well, that's an interesting take on "wire." Those two options of being totally crazy or cunningly deceptive seem to come up when we consider these accusations he made.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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Well, that's an interesting take on "wire." Those two options of being totally crazy or cunningly deceptive seem to come up when we consider these accusations he made.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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Thanks much.
Comment from kahpot
Well done indeed I am an Aussie and while reading, listening to all this transpire way down here, me and most of the people with me could only smile? at its outcome good luck for you and yours****kahpot
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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Well done indeed I am an Aussie and while reading, listening to all this transpire way down here, me and most of the people with me could only smile? at its outcome good luck for you and yours****kahpot
Comment Written 24-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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Thanks much for reading and your thoughtful comments.
Comment from Mustang Patty
LOL! Great picture of the Donald 'tweeting.' I think your poem does a great job of exposing the problem in this wild news story. He has tried to back his way out of the big fat lie, but I think he will get away with it - as he has with so much.
~patty~
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2017
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LOL! Great picture of the Donald 'tweeting.' I think your poem does a great job of exposing the problem in this wild news story. He has tried to back his way out of the big fat lie, but I think he will get away with it - as he has with so much.
~patty~
Comment Written 24-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2017
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Thanks much for reading and agreed.
