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Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Autumn's Slow Decay"Collection of haikus
6 total reviews
Comment from Cranial Thinker
A sense of newness seems to always divinely become soulfully colorized making it an event of excitement in quiet whispers of meaningful gestures mimicking dances translated in a transferred manner to us so as to ease the changes of new beginnings a see you later kind of connotation in gestural speech....Wonderfully penned....Cranial Thinker
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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A sense of newness seems to always divinely become soulfully colorized making it an event of excitement in quiet whispers of meaningful gestures mimicking dances translated in a transferred manner to us so as to ease the changes of new beginnings a see you later kind of connotation in gestural speech....Wonderfully penned....Cranial Thinker
Comment Written 25-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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Thank-you so much, my dear brother. Our friendship grows, until one day, here, there, or in the air, we shall meet.
Until then,
Godspeed.
Brother Bager
Comment from Hitcher
Your in the Haiku club mate, nice, I've been toying with the idea of joining but not before I take one of Gypsy's classes of course. I enjoyed your Badger, those leaves are just starting to turn here now, Autumn is on its way.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2017
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Your in the Haiku club mate, nice, I've been toying with the idea of joining but not before I take one of Gypsy's classes of course. I enjoyed your Badger, those leaves are just starting to turn here now, Autumn is on its way.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2017
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Thanks Hitcher. I just dove right in.
Darren~
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
I really like this haiku with the two lines interconnecting talking about the leaves of Autumn as they release from the trees and the final aaaaahhhh line putting an end to the haiku
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2017
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I really like this haiku with the two lines interconnecting talking about the leaves of Autumn as they release from the trees and the final aaaaahhhh line putting an end to the haiku
Comment Written 23-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2017
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Thank you for taking the time to read and reply, I really appreciate your feedback.
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Comment from DR DIP
Are the change of the season. Its great how different occurrences in nature depict the change of each season This is very descriptive Thanks for sharing
dip
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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Are the change of the season. Its great how different occurrences in nature depict the change of each season This is very descriptive Thanks for sharing
dip
Comment Written 23-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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Thank-you, Doc. I have always been inspired by the seasons, and my poem,
"Autumn's Gold" was my first of ten now all time best
Cheers,
Darren~
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes my friend this is well written full of imagery you have done well using this form and the presentation adds the finishing touches regards Jill
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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Yes my friend this is well written full of imagery you have done well using this form and the presentation adds the finishing touches regards Jill
Comment Written 23-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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Thank-you so much. I really enjoy writing haikus, it allows me to focus and condense these concepts. I really appreciate the feedback.
Godspeed,
Brother Badger
Comment from lyenochka
I'm always sad to see the autumn leaves go (except having to rake them) but they do become helpful compost (decaying) and blanketing the "sleepy ground." Nice!
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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I'm always sad to see the autumn leaves go (except having to rake them) but they do become helpful compost (decaying) and blanketing the "sleepy ground." Nice!
Comment Written 23-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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Thank-you so much. I really enjoy writing haikus, it allows me to focus and condense these concepts. I really appreciate the feedback.
Godspeed,
Brother Badger
