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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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Let Filo would try for the trick of drabble, and his act upon a big idea might not succeed, but Antony would know the art of pick and pin fruition; I enjoyed this draggle act of fun clearly depicted, I liked.

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 Comment Written 23-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
    Thanks, ALD, for the excellent review. Bill