Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed your nature poem. Good job on the syllable count per line. Your art/picture is fitting.

Good job & thanks for sharing. Yes, nature does what nature intends.

Best wishes in the contest. Jan

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017

Thanks for reading & critique zanya

Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

"Blossom time
or fall of leaf is
Nature's ode"
this is fine piece of poetry dear anonymous! i'm a little perplexed with the content. i do get the concept of nature's ode but am weary about the two endings being tied together.
anyhoo, thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings!
rebekka x

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017

Thanks for reading zanya

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Your little 3-5-3 tells a tale of budding spring. Leaves come and go as new growth takes hold. Thank you for sharing this lovely poem,
~patty~

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017

Thanks for reading zanya