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Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "haiku (people come, people go)"A collection of haiku written by FanStory Poets
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Comment from Lindagail Hall
I just love this style I've been eating up on it though the text I've read doesn't give the same line count as is used in other countries, if I've understood correctly it's due to translation. I am going to have a shot at this. I'd really appreciate your in put if you have spare time only. Sad that people do come and go yet the trees well rooted to its spot I have a thing about trees love them this may sound crazy but I feel what they say.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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I just love this style I've been eating up on it though the text I've read doesn't give the same line count as is used in other countries, if I've understood correctly it's due to translation. I am going to have a shot at this. I'd really appreciate your in put if you have spare time only. Sad that people do come and go yet the trees well rooted to its spot I have a thing about trees love them this may sound crazy but I feel what they say.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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Hello, my friend, your reviews are always helpful, respectful, and kind. You are a top notch reviewer and I am grateful. Your generosity is always a precious gift to me Thank you for the bottom of my heart.
namaste,
Gypsy Haijin Sensei
Fanstory Instructor and poet
Member of the Haiku Society of America
~*~ a new haiku class every month ~*~
<>o<> Haiku 201 starts on April 5th<>o<>
~<>o<> Haiga starts on May 1st <>o<>~
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
This Haiku is another fabulous write.
It is very true, is it my imagination or
do you see a person in the shape of the tree? lol
~Kerry~
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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This Haiku is another fabulous write.
It is very true, is it my imagination or
do you see a person in the shape of the tree? lol
~Kerry~
Comment Written 23-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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Hello, my friend, your reviews are always helpful, respectful, and kind. You are a top notch reviewer and I am grateful. Your generosity is always a precious gift to me Thank you for the bottom of my heart.
namaste,
Gypsy Haijin Sensei
Fanstory Instructor and poet
Member of the Haiku Society of America
~*~ a new haiku class every month ~*~
<>o<> Haiku 201 starts on April 5th<>o<>
~<>o<> Haiga starts on May 1st <>o<>~
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Comment from Mark Schardine
Think of how a tree can live centuries, yet each year produces a burst of youthful energy as its flowers open. They never seem to weaken, only to strengthen.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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Think of how a tree can live centuries, yet each year produces a burst of youthful energy as its flowers open. They never seem to weaken, only to strengthen.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
Hello, my friend, your reviews are always helpful, respectful, and kind. You are a top notch reviewer and I am grateful. Your generosity is always a precious gift to me Thank you for the bottom of my heart.
namaste,
Gypsy Haijin Sensei
Fanstory Instructor and poet
Member of the Haiku Society of America
~*~ a new haiku class every month ~*~
<>o<> Haiku 201 starts on April 5th<>o<>
~<>o<> Haiga starts on May 1st <>o<>~
Comment from DR DIP
Yep, the good old tree is here for the long haul. No fleeting visit, He stands steadfast. This begs the question? do trees have a gender Is there a male and a female tree? lol
Nice haiku Gypsy, food for thought
dip
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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Yep, the good old tree is here for the long haul. No fleeting visit, He stands steadfast. This begs the question? do trees have a gender Is there a male and a female tree? lol
Nice haiku Gypsy, food for thought
dip
Comment Written 23-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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LoL. Dr dip, you are a one track man. Hehehe. I like to laugh. Thank you.
And thank you for the lovely review.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from chcbeck
I have a fascination with trees and how long they have been around and what has taken place over the years around them. This is what drew me to your poem. Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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I have a fascination with trees and how long they have been around and what has taken place over the years around them. This is what drew me to your poem. Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 23-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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Thank you for the review.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from sunnilicious
The sound animation scared me, but it's nice now. Great artwork choice. Good visual imagery created. Good alliteration with S words. Good comparison between life and nature. The satori is subtle and nice. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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The sound animation scared me, but it's nice now. Great artwork choice. Good visual imagery created. Good alliteration with S words. Good comparison between life and nature. The satori is subtle and nice. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 23-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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I'm sorry about the sound scaring you :(
Thank you for the the review and kind words
Gypsy hugs
