Circle of Friends
Appreciation each other12 total reviews
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Dear friend, I really love the concept of keeping warm within the circle of friends. It is great as we grow to old age to know that the rays of lve shed by us along the way has born fruits, but as you say sometimes God has other plan as in my case. So I understand.
Well done.
Danny Jock
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2017
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Dear friend, I really love the concept of keeping warm within the circle of friends. It is great as we grow to old age to know that the rays of lve shed by us along the way has born fruits, but as you say sometimes God has other plan as in my case. So I understand.
Well done.
Danny Jock
Comment Written 24-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2017
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Danny,
Thank you for the kind comments and great review of my poem. I know I have plans, but they may not be in line with God's. I get p many times, but whenever God takes the reins, it I is.much better. thanks again. kat
Comment from melyuki
Hi HappyKat thanks for sharing this deep and meaningful verse , beautifully scribed. Many lovely thoughts and emotions flow from beginning to end of your words.. There is something very warm and special about our circle of friends. I do believe People come into our lives for a reason.. many different reasons , at different times of our ongoing journey. Very thought provoking poem.. much enjoyed HappyKat. thanks for the ride. happy smiles from mel xx
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2017
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Hi HappyKat thanks for sharing this deep and meaningful verse , beautifully scribed. Many lovely thoughts and emotions flow from beginning to end of your words.. There is something very warm and special about our circle of friends. I do believe People come into our lives for a reason.. many different reasons , at different times of our ongoing journey. Very thought provoking poem.. much enjoyed HappyKat. thanks for the ride. happy smiles from mel xx
Comment Written 24-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2017
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Me
I appreciate all of your comments on my poem. I am glad you enjoyed reading it. God sent all of these people to me and I feel so blessed.
Kat
Comment from Mastery
This is six-star writing, my dear friend. I feel sorry that I don't have anymore. Your weaving of the circle and it's affect on our lives is absolutely wonderful, Kathy.
"From life's first moment to the final breath,
blessed by the miracles within the circle," Bless you. Great write. Bob
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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This is six-star writing, my dear friend. I feel sorry that I don't have anymore. Your weaving of the circle and it's affect on our lives is absolutely wonderful, Kathy.
"From life's first moment to the final breath,
blessed by the miracles within the circle," Bless you. Great write. Bob
Comment Written 23-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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Bob,
Thank you so much for your kind words and it is your enjoyment of this poem that makes my day. I'm happy you liked it, and that means more to me than the stars! Blessings to you. Thanks again. Kathy
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a lovely tribute to friends who mean a lot to you and new one's that come into your life. God friends are like gold and your poem says so much about your circle of friends, a well written and compassionate piece, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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This is a lovely tribute to friends who mean a lot to you and new one's that come into your life. God friends are like gold and your poem says so much about your circle of friends, a well written and compassionate piece, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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Dolly,
Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. I have been very blessed to have these wonderful people in my life. It is, without question, the input you give, warms my heart. Thank you. Blessings. Kat
Comment from June Sargent
What a lovely way to look at life and the surprising places you may discover from friendship. The circles do change to encompass others when ones disappear. Nice sentiments expressed eloquently.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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What a lovely way to look at life and the surprising places you may discover from friendship. The circles do change to encompass others when ones disappear. Nice sentiments expressed eloquently.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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June,
Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. Your comments are kind and I appreciate them. I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you again. Kat
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written heartfelt poem. We can make plans as much as we like. When we think we have everything under control, God present His better plan.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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A very well-written heartfelt poem. We can make plans as much as we like. When we think we have everything under control, God present His better plan.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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Sandra,
Thank you for the kind review. I agree with you whole heartedly. Sometimes I think my plan is good, but God has one better, even though mine wasn't bad. Patience...I don't have a lot of and ask God to show me His way. Thank you again. Kat
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
I really like the sunshine and positivity which emanates from both the words and image
presented today.
Indeed we all yearn to be sustained by strong bonds of friendship and love and your poem reinforces the sunshine and loving moments to be gained and shared within this special circle
May you always cind sunshine in your life.
:-) Shirley
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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I really like the sunshine and positivity which emanates from both the words and image
presented today.
Indeed we all yearn to be sustained by strong bonds of friendship and love and your poem reinforces the sunshine and loving moments to be gained and shared within this special circle
May you always cind sunshine in your life.
:-) Shirley
Comment Written 23-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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First, let me tell you how much I appreciate your time and the review of my poem. I am so glad you enjoyed it. Thank you again for your time and wonderful comments. Kat
Comment from nuthead
Some lovely language and sentiments here. Well crafted. I like your choice of the water ripple to represent relationships, and the circle of life. Circumference ever-expanding. Nice.
A couple small typos here:
reaching, until crossings over another, <-- crossing (no 's')
blending all and enriching its' essence. <-- its (no apostrophe needed)
The alliteration and consonance in these lines is lovely:
"Pursuers of kindness and love, providing
peaceful harmony, encompassing all humanity."
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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Some lovely language and sentiments here. Well crafted. I like your choice of the water ripple to represent relationships, and the circle of life. Circumference ever-expanding. Nice.
A couple small typos here:
reaching, until crossings over another, <-- crossing (no 's')
blending all and enriching its' essence. <-- its (no apostrophe needed)
The alliteration and consonance in these lines is lovely:
"Pursuers of kindness and love, providing
peaceful harmony, encompassing all humanity."
Comment Written 22-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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Thank you for taking the time to read and reviewing my poem. I am so grateful for catching the errors. :) I have edited and corrected it. I also appreciate your expression of enjoyment. Thank you again. Kat
Comment from GoodHearted Woman
I am trying to match-up what you say in your poem and what you say in your 'author's notes' afterward. One seems to negate the other, or maybe it's just I. The most common mistake I find in my reviewing is the pronoun: its. I referred to my big blue book of grammar in everything I say but always refer every writer to a professional. We have many English teachers, professors, and writers who have published many books. I always say to ask one of them if it's correct. I just now read (& it's so simple): there is only ONE case for a pronoun to have an apostrophe and that is a contraction. If the sentence makes sense w/o the contraction, then it needs no apostrophe.
It's a celebration of its own kind. Hope I haven't stepped on toes! GoodHearted Woman
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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I am trying to match-up what you say in your poem and what you say in your 'author's notes' afterward. One seems to negate the other, or maybe it's just I. The most common mistake I find in my reviewing is the pronoun: its. I referred to my big blue book of grammar in everything I say but always refer every writer to a professional. We have many English teachers, professors, and writers who have published many books. I always say to ask one of them if it's correct. I just now read (& it's so simple): there is only ONE case for a pronoun to have an apostrophe and that is a contraction. If the sentence makes sense w/o the contraction, then it needs no apostrophe.
It's a celebration of its own kind. Hope I haven't stepped on toes! GoodHearted Woman
Comment Written 22-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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Thank you for stopping by to read and review my poem. Also, you are correct, the apostrophe should NOT be there and I am in your debt for pointing this out. I am editing it now. Kat :)
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
That is funny how our circles tend to fluctuate through life, and then, as you said, change completely, and not exactly how you would have wanted them to change.
I like the intersecting circles, like the birth of a child might add.
Wonderful job,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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That is funny how our circles tend to fluctuate through life, and then, as you said, change completely, and not exactly how you would have wanted them to change.
I like the intersecting circles, like the birth of a child might add.
Wonderful job,
Rhonda
Comment Written 22-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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Rhonda,
It really is. Sometimes I think it is us ,maturing, surrounding with someone we find more comfortable with at . This moment. Thank you for stopping by to read and reviewing my poem. It is much appreciated. Bless you. Kat
