You Garden Cross Grace
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Comment from Teri7
This is very beautiful what you have penned for the contest. I love the songs you chose and love. Best wishes in the contest! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2017
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This is very beautiful what you have penned for the contest. I love the songs you chose and love. Best wishes in the contest! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 25-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2017
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Thank you Terri7. giovanni
Comment from Sis Cat
While "Simplicity is the key to Christianity in Religion," your poem is too simple. I have read a couple of other entries and the poets wove the titles of Gospel songs together into beautiful rhyming poems. You selected favorite christian song titles but you did not weave them together into a cohesive narrative poem that tells a story. I strongly urge you to read ALL of the entries of the contest posted on the contest Christian Song Titles tell a story! Next, revise your poem before the deadline. Unless you do, there is a high likelihood that the judges or contest coordinator will disqualify your entry for failing to follow direction.
You have your work cut out for you in revising. You are right: simplicity is the heart of Christianity, but when it comes to FanStory contests, the voters and judges want meat on the bones.
Thank you for sharing, but please revise.
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While "Simplicity is the key to Christianity in Religion," your poem is too simple. I have read a couple of other entries and the poets wove the titles of Gospel songs together into beautiful rhyming poems. You selected favorite christian song titles but you did not weave them together into a cohesive narrative poem that tells a story. I strongly urge you to read ALL of the entries of the contest posted on the contest Christian Song Titles tell a story! Next, revise your poem before the deadline. Unless you do, there is a high likelihood that the judges or contest coordinator will disqualify your entry for failing to follow direction.
You have your work cut out for you in revising. You are right: simplicity is the heart of Christianity, but when it comes to FanStory contests, the voters and judges want meat on the bones.
Thank you for sharing, but please revise.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2017
Comment from Hitcher
Ha, Simplicity is the key to Christianity in Religion. Nice! Not saying I agree but I like the saying friend. Amazing Grace and The Old Rugged Cross, two beauty's indeed. Good luck !
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Ha, Simplicity is the key to Christianity in Religion. Nice! Not saying I agree but I like the saying friend. Amazing Grace and The Old Rugged Cross, two beauty's indeed. Good luck !
Comment Written 21-Mar-2017
