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Comment from Mustang Patty
This is a lovely suite of poems about the weeping willow. I was always drawn to these trees when I was little. That is until my mom started to use the wispy and de-leaved limbs as whips for when I was bad! Your poems flow well, and are interlinked. Thank you for sharing,
~patty~
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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This is a lovely suite of poems about the weeping willow. I was always drawn to these trees when I was little. That is until my mom started to use the wispy and de-leaved limbs as whips for when I was bad! Your poems flow well, and are interlinked. Thank you for sharing,
~patty~
Comment Written 21-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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Oh my Goodness, I couldn't help but giggle when you said you loved them till mom used them when you were bad. It's not funny, it's just the way you said it was. Aww poor little thing. Thanks Patty
Comment from Rasmine
Good little story. I felt sad and lonely reading of her grave. You have a way with words. I really love the image of the weeping willow and love. :)
Hopefully, I'll see you tonight. :)
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017
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Good little story. I felt sad and lonely reading of her grave. You have a way with words. I really love the image of the weeping willow and love. :)
Hopefully, I'll see you tonight. :)
Comment Written 21-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017
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Thank you so much Rasmine, and Yes so glad you reminded me lol.
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LOL, I remind you, but then I forget!!!!! Damn :P
Comment from Dean Kuch
That's some interesting history you've included concerning the legend behind the name of the weeping willow tree, Kerry.
I enjoyed it almost as much as your haiku suite featuring the tree of the same name.
Notice I said "almost", heh-heh...
~Dean
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017
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That's some interesting history you've included concerning the legend behind the name of the weeping willow tree, Kerry.
I enjoyed it almost as much as your haiku suite featuring the tree of the same name.
Notice I said "almost", heh-heh...
~Dean
Comment Written 21-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017
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ha-ha . Thank you so much Dean. In an Autumn weeping willow I did that had to few of words; I had put a longer more detailed story of willow. I did quick notes today; for I have been on a writing frenzy. I'm about to post another suite. :) I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
she cries for love
love spills her blood
willows grave cries
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willow cried for love
love- spilt her blood--
her grave stands tall- weeps
What a beautiful back story, it reminds me of Daphne the tree nymph, or of Isabella and the pot of basil, grand and yet classical well done this is immense and deserves a six but I don't have one love Meia x
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017
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she cries for love
love spills her blood
willows grave cries
__________
willow cried for love
love- spilt her blood--
her grave stands tall- weeps
What a beautiful back story, it reminds me of Daphne the tree nymph, or of Isabella and the pot of basil, grand and yet classical well done this is immense and deserves a six but I don't have one love Meia x
Comment Written 21-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017
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Thank you so much Meia, your a doll.x
