Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

aawww, such a sweet tribute to your one and only dear patty! i love the mundane approach to love, the daily life that brings a couple together.
thank you for sharing!
blessings!
rebekka x

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017

Thank you for your generous review. I appreciate your time to read and review, as well as your thoughtful comments,
~patty~

Comment from Joy Graham

Excellent

Oh for the days when my hair didn't have silver sparkles, heavy sigh... That is a lovely picture, and your message has a home made apple pie quality to it. You present a feeling of home and all is right in your world when your hubby comes home from work at the end of the day. Nice free verse sketch :)

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017

Thank you for your generous review. I appreciate your time to read and review, as well as your thoughtful comments,
~patty~

Comment from Caressa_08

Exceptional

Aw, a true sweet romance seems to be present in this poem about husband & a wife who truly misses her soul-mate who anxiously awaits his return & it seems to be mutual....And really like the last line & great photo displayed, making it quite the read for those... especially who can relate when their spouse leaves for work & gone for a time, how glad they are to see one another again...With a very Lovely last line to end your free verse, and great photo displayed to make your poem so authentic.

Thanks for sharing...Caressa_08

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017

Thank you for your generous review. I appreciate your time to read and review, as well as your thoughtful comments. The six stars are just a glorious bonus,
~patty~

Comment from MaggieF

Excellent

What a lovely picture and a lovely poem, the picture might be old but your love still comes across loud and clear. The different length stanzas somehow works, 'My heart takes flight' says it all. MaggieF

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017

Thank you for your generous review. I appreciate your time to read and review, as well as your thoughtful comments,
~patty~

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

hello my friend

I like your poem. it's adorable. I hope you showed your husband this poem, I'm sure he loved it. I think showing love is very important to keep the romance alive. Good job!

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017

Thank you for your generous review. I appreciate your time to read and review, as well as your thoughtful comments,
~patty~

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

A very good story of love. There is nothing better than young love when it first starts, except for love that has stood the test of time and grows stronger.

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017

Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. This poem came from a deep place in my heart. I thank God each and every day for a love like ours,
~patty~

Comment from RGstar

Excellent

And you experimented well. Some of these can feel forced, but how natural this was. I actually had a little tear of emotion well up. Love to see happiness, and this gave just that.
I know life is not always roses, but that is what we have, short or long straw, and have to find the love.
I love the photo. Looks a lovely man.
My best to you both.
May your days be long with joy.
RG

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017

Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I am happy you enjoyed the poem. We are both lucky to have each other,
~patty~

Comment from moonsunrise

Excellent

What a great picture and wonderful testament from a woman who loves her man. Your poem is so refreshing! Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017

Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I am happy you enjoyed the poem.
~patty~

Comment from pome lover

Excellent

well, Miss Patty, if that was 17 years ago and you can still write that love poem, the gray/silver makes no difference - or at least no negative difference. Sounds like a happy marriage to me. Lucky you. Lucky him.
Your poem shows a quiet satisfaction- a feeling of well being, and you can't beat that! How many people would love to have that!
good job.
pome lover

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017

Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words and warm comments,
~patty~

Comment from davisr (Rhonda)

Excellent

Awww, this is so sweet. My husband leaves before dawn, too!!
You two seem to have a wonderful and loving relationship!!
I appreciate you sharing your sweet husband with us in this poem.

Take care,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017

Thank you for stopping by to read and review. I'm so lucky to have a loving husband, and I do my best to never take him for granted,
~patty~