the stranger
a horror tale5 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Oh my goodness, this is a horror story. Well done, interesting, with a real surprise ending. Impactful. You set the scene well. I wish you much good luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2017
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Oh my goodness, this is a horror story. Well done, interesting, with a real surprise ending. Impactful. You set the scene well. I wish you much good luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 24-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2017
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Thanks for the review.I usually leave these ones to Kuch ha ha. I like (like?) the subtle mind horror, sometimes less is more, Cheers and have a great week end Marilyn.
Comment from Hitcher
A nice little tale friend well written, strong visuals but not really horror,well not what I consider horror, sorry! just being honest. But who the... am I : ) we all have differing opinions when it comes to what we consider horror, I'm more of a blood, guts, malevolence and terror kinda guy. But I can't fault your writing friend so I'll wish you well in the contest... Good luck !!
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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A nice little tale friend well written, strong visuals but not really horror,well not what I consider horror, sorry! just being honest. But who the... am I : ) we all have differing opinions when it comes to what we consider horror, I'm more of a blood, guts, malevolence and terror kinda guy. But I can't fault your writing friend so I'll wish you well in the contest... Good luck !!
Comment Written 22-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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Haha, chacun a son gout. I usually leave these ones to Kuch. I like (like?) the mind game horror, subtle, yet scares the hell out of me when revealed.. Thanks for the review, cheers, j
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You are right. One cannot be too careful with strangers. Good job with the prompt. I like how you left the ending to the readers' imagination.
Good job & best wishes in the contest. Jan
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2017
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You are right. One cannot be too careful with strangers. Good job with the prompt. I like how you left the ending to the readers' imagination.
Good job & best wishes in the contest. Jan
Comment Written 20-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2017
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Yup a little warning to single girls on vaca. Sometimes, they leave no tracks! Cheers, j
Comment from Mustang Patty
Ouch! This indeed is a flash horror story. Imagine spending the day with the devil himself. I wonder what he had planned for the evening. Thank you for sharing this well crafted piece,
~patty~
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Ouch! This indeed is a flash horror story. Imagine spending the day with the devil himself. I wonder what he had planned for the evening. Thank you for sharing this well crafted piece,
~patty~
Comment Written 19-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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I spent a week with him one night ha ha not. Thanks for the review, I usually leave these ones for Kuch, cheers, j
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
Just for presentation purposes I'd think about incorporating some additional line breaks in in that opening paragraph and dialogue sequence.
nice turn around in the last sentence.
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Hi there,
Just for presentation purposes I'd think about incorporating some additional line breaks in in that opening paragraph and dialogue sequence.
nice turn around in the last sentence.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 19-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Will do, thanks for the input. Have a peaceful Sunday, cheers, j
