Trust
Trust in God awakens our soul.51 total reviews
Comment from Selina Stambi
Whether we perceive Him or not,
But His sense in life works a lot ... I like these lines. That's what faith is all about, isn't it? :)
'Trust in God' awakens our soul, ... this line reminds me of the scripture in the book of Proverbs: Trust in the Lord with all your heart and lean not on your own understanding ...
Which is pretty much the essence of your poem!
Good aabb quatrains in the stanzas. An uplifting, encouraging piece.
Best wishes for the contest, RP!
Have a wonderful Easter weekend.
Sonali :)
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2017
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Whether we perceive Him or not,
But His sense in life works a lot ... I like these lines. That's what faith is all about, isn't it? :)
'Trust in God' awakens our soul, ... this line reminds me of the scripture in the book of Proverbs: Trust in the Lord with all your heart and lean not on your own understanding ...
Which is pretty much the essence of your poem!
Good aabb quatrains in the stanzas. An uplifting, encouraging piece.
Best wishes for the contest, RP!
Have a wonderful Easter weekend.
Sonali :)
Comment Written 13-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2017
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Hi Sonali,
Thank you very much for the wonderful review, so encouraging, and worth remembering words.
Thanks a lot for the Best Wishes also.
Have a pleasant weekend!
~ RP
Comment from Rubylou
Hello RP,
I enjoyed your poem, especially the line,"Whether we perceive Him or not."
So often our lives are touched by God's devine hand and we don't see or appreciate His direction.
Many times only upon reflection of things past can we understand how He touches us.
Rubylou
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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Hello RP,
I enjoyed your poem, especially the line,"Whether we perceive Him or not."
So often our lives are touched by God's devine hand and we don't see or appreciate His direction.
Many times only upon reflection of things past can we understand how He touches us.
Rubylou
Comment Written 22-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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Hello Rubylou,
What a pleasant surprise!
I'm really not finding proper words to express my thanks to you for your so encouraging words backed by this unforgettable SIXER at this stage when the time is run out.
Thanks a lot for this honor, and sharing your lovely thoughts.
Have a nice time!
~RP
Comment from Bill Schott
This modern sonnet form, Trust, is put together well and certainty entreaty the readers to go hard and long to display the power we receive from our faith. The bigger goal takes us further towards success.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017
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This modern sonnet form, Trust, is put together well and certainty entreaty the readers to go hard and long to display the power we receive from our faith. The bigger goal takes us further towards success.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017
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Hello Bill,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and encouraging words.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP
Comment from DR DIP
Nice little write P you have captured your faith in God nicely Good luck in this faith poetry competition and thanks for sharing this with us
dip
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017
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Nice little write P you have captured your faith in God nicely Good luck in this faith poetry competition and thanks for sharing this with us
dip
Comment Written 21-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017
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Hello DR DIP,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and encouraging words backed by Good Luck wishes.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP
Comment from Ulla
Hi RP, it's good to see you back. I loved your poem and I am so pleased you derive strength from your belief. It's what is important. I liked it a lot. Wonderfully written. All the best. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2017
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Hi RP, it's good to see you back. I loved your poem and I am so pleased you derive strength from your belief. It's what is important. I liked it a lot. Wonderfully written. All the best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 20-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2017
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Hello Ulla,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and encouraging words.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP
Comment from dmt1967
This is a good faith poem. Humanity has to believe in something to give us faith which in turn gives us hope. I enjoyed this poem. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2017
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This is a good faith poem. Humanity has to believe in something to give us faith which in turn gives us hope. I enjoyed this poem. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2017
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Hello dmt1967,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and encouraging words backed by Good Luck Wishes.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP
Comment from Mastery
Excellent writing here, RP. I liked this stanza in particular:
"Trust in God' awakens our soul,
And helps us focus on the goal;
Enhancing our self-confidence,
It leads us to sure excellence"
A suggestion if I may: Wouldn't this be better considering soul should be plural when connected "our" so how about "Trust in God awakens THE soul"
Still great as is, RP. Blessings. Bob
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2017
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Excellent writing here, RP. I liked this stanza in particular:
"Trust in God' awakens our soul,
And helps us focus on the goal;
Enhancing our self-confidence,
It leads us to sure excellence"
A suggestion if I may: Wouldn't this be better considering soul should be plural when connected "our" so how about "Trust in God awakens THE soul"
Still great as is, RP. Blessings. Bob
Comment Written 20-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2017
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Hello Bob,
Thank you very much for your so lovely, and encouraging words backed by SIX STARS and Blessings.
Good suggestion! Thanks a lot for the same, but now the time has almost run out for making any change.
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP
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Not that you would...but you can change anything you want anytime up to the date the contest ends. :) Bob
Comment from Thomas Bowling
An excellent contest entry. I'm sure you will do well.
My favorite line:
Whether we perceive Him or not,
Someone once said, "It doesn't matter weather or not you believe in God. The fact remains, God believes in you."
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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An excellent contest entry. I'm sure you will do well.
My favorite line:
Whether we perceive Him or not,
Someone once said, "It doesn't matter weather or not you believe in God. The fact remains, God believes in you."
Comment Written 19-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Hello Thomas Bowling,
Thank you very much for reading, reviewing, sharing your so lovely thoughts, and Good Wishes for the contest.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP
Comment from Bill O'Bier
If you keep your faith and if you're grateful, you'll see God open up doors. I believe I'm blessed and I thank God for every day for everything that happens for me. Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem.
Bill~
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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If you keep your faith and if you're grateful, you'll see God open up doors. I believe I'm blessed and I thank God for every day for everything that happens for me. Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem.
Bill~
Comment Written 19-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Hello Bill,
Thank you very much for reading, reviewing, and sharing your so lovely thoughts.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
Really enjoyed this beautiful poem, such a lovely flow throughout with some wonderful spiritual lines.
A fantastic picture to accompany your words
Have a great evening
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Really enjoyed this beautiful poem, such a lovely flow throughout with some wonderful spiritual lines.
A fantastic picture to accompany your words
Have a great evening
Comment Written 19-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Hello YNWA,
Thank you very much for reading, reviewing, and sharing your so lovely thoughts.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP
