Comment from Lulube

Excellent

good alliteration with the first line, feathered friends fly, and they do here in a frenzy sometimes. great imagery and the last line is so true. When they fly I wish they'd take me with them lol

lulube

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017

Thanks:) I want to fly with them too, especially south in the winter.

Comment from honeytree

Excellent

How fortunate our feathered
friends are in everyway
flying to any part of the
earth anytime.

Great art work and words

Honeytree

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017

Thank you for the kind review:)

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Hi Teresa - good addition to the book. Your lines one and two interconnect perfectly and line three is a very good satori. Good use of alliteration with the letter F. Nice new picture of you on your profile page. Warm regards Dorothy x

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2017

Thank you Dorothy:)

Comment from IndianaIrish

Excellent

I like your satori for this haiku, Teresa. You've got two great lines of imagery, and the perfect aha for the haiku. I love the sound of honking geese flying overhead in the fall. Great job.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2017

Thank you Karyn:)

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Well, hopefully the birds won't have to worry about the frost too much longer and that spring is right around the corner. Nice alliteration throughout the entire first line. Marilyn

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2017

Thank you so much Marilyn:)

Comment from Lu Saluna

Excellent

I like this haiku. You have two great sentences to create a wonderful image. I see Canadian Geese, I love the honking noise they make Great alliteration in the first line.
"frost warning" is a wonderful satori. Really awesome haiku.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2017

Thank you so much:)

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Yes my friend this is well written and made me smile definitely a sign that weather is changing well done I enjoyed regards Jill

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2017

Thank you Jill:)

Comment from Nan Beeson

Excellent

Re your Haiku poem about our feathered friends....

feathered friends fly
south to warmer climate--
frost warning

I seems to me that these flying creations of God often have more sense than humans.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2017

Thanks Nan:)

reply by Nan Beeson on 18-Mar-2017

You are welcome.

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

An excellent autumn haiku Teresa. Many of our friends fly south for the winter too. Here in NC, we don't usually get harsh winters but a trip south would always be a welcome change.

Nicely done with lovely "f" alliteration..

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2017

Thank you Janet:)

Comment from Sasha

Excellent

This is definitely deserving of a 6 but I, sadly, am out. Excellent connection of the first two line and the satori is marvelous. Beautiful work with this one, I enjoyed it very much. I also like that you did not use an illustration with this. Your words painted the picture perfectly.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2017

Thanks for the thought of a six and thanks for the great review Sasha:)